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November 08, 2009
Australia Male
Member of Aurora Borealis Pack
lol

April 01, 2009
Usa Male
In all fairness, it's not very realistic. I only got as far as page 5, but I can't say I liked it much. Wish I could say better, but I thought you'd prefer honesty.

February 14, 2009
Usa Female
Leader of the DarkDemonWolves
It was GREAT! But too make it even greatER, could you add things like this ->"" when the people talk? :innocentgrin: Other than that everything was AWSOME!

January 28, 2009
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
Not half bad there Ridgey. :cool: :P

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January 06, 2009
please comment tell me how i can make my next story even better:cool:


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