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[[Naggie !]]	August 14, 2007

oops, i meant the verge of betrayal not it ends
tonight...


Skygirl	October 06, 2007

AHHHHHHH, Kiona has an enemy! I wonder if she knows about
it, or if Achak does....

It's great so far, I
can't wait for more on this one!


Pommy	September 24, 2007

So this is Kita's story? Now I like her more and feel sorry
for her D=


Sunkissi n	January 12, 2008

I finally decided to read this, after seeing the Kita pic in
your image gallery XD And it was just freaking awesome.
Gotta feel sorry for Kita. D: Great idea! Loved it so much.
:D


Kiveah	December 24, 2008

I'm so glad you didn't just make Kita a bitch for no reason. :D


American Wolf	October 06, 2006

You ROCK CAT!!!!!!!


Guest	September 21, 2006

Simply blew me away! I was always curious of Kita and she's
awesome! Another great story!^^


Xx_Innoc ence Catt_xX	September 21, 2006

WOOOOOT! cat your fics rox my soxs off!


VahnTheW hiteWolf	September 21, 2006

ooohh yay! i was wondering when you were gonna post a fic of
this ^___^


Juuchan1 7	September 21, 2006

	WQ > Balto > WoC

Ooh, very nice. Kita seems like such a selfish character,
but I like the way you gave her a bit of a sweet side (if
you get my drift *wink*). I wonder if this will be continued
. . . because you already know that I'd read it! Great work,
Cat!


Blackspi ritwolf	September 22, 2006

Wow, that was very good! You're so multi-talented. I liked
your use of vocabulary as well. I can't help but feel sorry
for Kita in a way. ^^ Well, can't wait for your next fic!
and, Do you have any tips on writing Fanfics? just
wondering.


Blackspi ritwolf	September 22, 2006


Guest	September 22, 2006

niiiiiicee


Guest	September 22, 2006

OMG!! CLiff HANGERS!!!! So good. I really would like to read
more.....if your writing more. Well, this one was sooo good.
Loved it a lot.


Better	September 22, 2006

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very good!! you are a very good writer^^


Cielowol f	September 22, 2006

whoa. That's all I can manage to think of. it's really
interesting. what will be next? *looks over fan fic again*
whoa


Draco	September 22, 2006

	Senior Mod

Ooh, very nice!! I saw you posted this and was all excited,
. It's awesome. I kinda feel bad for Kita too. Can't
blame her for liking Achak though, hehe.


Guest	September 22, 2006

Thats what I call a Fan Fic!!!!!!!!!


Guest	September 22, 2006

Cool!


Tibbeh	September 23, 2006

	I'm not a wolf. Kthxbai.

Very nice Cat! I feal sorry for Kita, though. xD. Like Draco
said, I don't blame her for having the hots for Achak.


Silver_w olf99654	September 23, 2006

very nice!


Guest	September 23, 2006

I loved it!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!!!


Beauty Jenna	September 27, 2006

Great story, are you gonna write more about them? (I hope)
I finaly had a chance to read it all^^Well done!!^^


Guest	September 24, 2006

Wow, poor Kita. I wonder if shes gonna try to get Kiona away
from Achack. Anyways, I love your fanfics! Keep
writing!


Olivia_t he_Harpe r	September 28, 2006

Wow, awesome! I love it! I hope Kayiya is dealt with in the
next one...


Guest	October 02, 2006

Nice fic Cat! ^^ Let her rip that doggeh apart.


JennaHea rts	September 29, 2006

and congrats getting the top ten fanfics on you new one ^_^!


Guest	October 02, 2006

wow brilliant story it makes me almost feel srry for
kita.
Erm, may I please ask if I can draw kiona, she
is such an awsome character, if not I will totally
understand


Xx_Innoc ence Catt_xX	October 03, 2006

i'll kick kita's butt outta here, kiona win for anchak!
yehhhhh!


Jaylacin e_Chiboa	October 06, 2006

me like!!

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