Verge of Betrayal

Author : angryunicorn

Date sent : September 21, 2006

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Flashback/Character Developement

Description : Every protagonist has a rival! And Kita is Kiona's rival. This is Kita's story, explaining her hate for Kiona and her love for Achak and she gained entry in his pack. ALL CHARACTERS ARE COPYRIGHTED BY THEIR RESPECTFUL OWNERS.

Length : Short -

Characters :
Kita
Kita
Jerome
Jerome
Kayiya
Kayiya
Achak
Achak
Kanook
Kanook
Wit
Wit
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Verge of Betrayal
By angryunicorn

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May 05, 2012
Indonesia
That is so cool. Kita get ignored like. My parents pay attention to my brother than me. :(

March 16, 2011
U should become an author, you'd be good at it.

Guest
Guest
April 07, 2010
I love the Storey you should make another one like this!!!!!

January 05, 2010
cool story! you should make a sequel. i cant belive that her own sister would leave her to die well kita did try to over throw her sister

October 02, 2009
Canada Female
Werewolf Moon pack
i love this story ive read it about 134475 times do not ask why...because ill tell you!lol i liked it

April 26, 2007
Usa Female
That was a good story

June 03, 2007
Female
GREAT! You should write a sequel.

Guest
Guest
June 12, 2007
I liked this story. It was interesting, but Kita was kind of
annoying. I guess I should have pity for her, though I don't
think Achak loves her in that way. I don't know how to
pronounce her sis's name!

July 20, 2007
Usa Female
MAKE THE SEAQUEL!!!!!!

I've got meh eyes on
you!

Guest
Guest
August 10, 2007
Cool!I would like to know what happens afterward!

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