reason I could never get myself alone with Achak to get closer to him. I had found opportunities, but I supposed my reserved ness was the main reason why. I had never felt this way around anyone before and I assumed it was still love. But I wasn't sure if it was love for Achak or love for his power.

 

I still didn't let my feelings get in my way. I felt I was getting closer to my goal whenever Achak praised my actions. He never gave me myself compliments too often, but he would often praise the pack as a whole. 

One day the pack and I noticed a team of dogs trespassing into our territory. There were about six or seven of them pulling a long wooden man-built object with one man riding at the back of it like he could control anything. But what I found amusing was the lead dog halting without orders. She knew of our presence. I was about to call down to her in a sardonic way, but Achak left the scene and I followed him along with everyone else. I took one last look at the lead dog, not helping but finding her suspicious.

 

I awakened the next morning with Achak missing. The pack was a bit confused about his absence, but it wasn't long before he returned. We asked him where he went, but he only gave orders to move out. He seemed to be hiding something, so I asked him what it was myself.

 

"Don't question me." he replied, sounding a bit vexed. I backed off from him for the next few days, not wanting to anger him. But one day the pack stumbled upon a surprise I found familiar, but irritating. I gasped at the sight slightly. It was the lead dog we had seen a few days ago. All by her lonesome. Some pack members didn't think twice about her.

 

But when I looked in Achak's direction, I could tell that he took interest in her. And I was not about to let him take interest in anyone but me.



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May 05, 2012
Indonesia
That is so cool. Kita get ignored like. My parents pay attention to my brother than me. :(

March 16, 2011
U should become an author, you'd be good at it.

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Guest
April 07, 2010
I love the Storey you should make another one like this!!!!!

January 05, 2010
cool story! you should make a sequel. i cant belive that her own sister would leave her to die well kita did try to over throw her sister

October 02, 2009
Canada Female
Werewolf Moon pack
i love this story ive read it about 134475 times do not ask why...because ill tell you!lol i liked it

April 26, 2007
Usa Female
That was a good story

June 03, 2007
Female
GREAT! You should write a sequel.

Guest
Guest
June 12, 2007
I liked this story. It was interesting, but Kita was kind of
annoying. I guess I should have pity for her, though I don't
think Achak loves her in that way. I don't know how to
pronounce her sis's name!

July 20, 2007
Usa Female
MAKE THE SEAQUEL!!!!!!

I've got meh eyes on
you!

Guest
Guest
August 10, 2007
Cool!I would like to know what happens afterward!

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