thanks. and I'll do that

Well, the plot was interesting, but you need to break up the paragraphs more and try a spell check. All the same, I enjoyed it. Looking forward to more.

This was a VERY good story, one of your best! ^^ I don't have Speed's character page up, I took down because I plan on re-editing it better. For some reason everytime I saw the name "Slash", it reminded me of this famous guitar player from a band called Guns N Roses. XD Well, I hope you write more soon. I really enjoyed this story, it was awesome!