the shadow of the dark, the large war that no one could imagine begun. There was nothing more but chaos. Hundreds of Herrerasaurus died in thier shelter, no one in the pack had survived, left only an egg."
    By this point, Aleu could see tears welling up in Sotara's eyes, "Sotara, are you crying? You can stop the story if you want."
    "No, Aleu, I'm fine," he said before continuing his tale, "The baby hatched out in the piles of corpse, he cried for food but no one answered, it took some days for such a young Herrerasaurus to realize that he had nobody left to take care of him. Driven by hunger, he began his journey around the valley, all alone. A few days later, the story of the war spreaded throughout the valley. Since that moment, the only thing in the baby's mind was revenge. He swore to kill the Postosuchus that massacred. He named himself 'Sotara' and tried everything he could to get his fighting skills invincible, but without a good pack, he could never do anything to the Postosuchus. So he started spending his life helping other creatures. until today, he is still living like this." "I'm so sorry about your past, Sotara," Aleu said, "Nah, forget it," said Sotara.
    "What about Naga in two years ago?" asked Aleu, "He was a yearling Herrerasaurus in another pack. He didn't know anything about that war, until everyone in the valley talked about this. And a year later, after I have learned most of the fighting skills, I was known in the name of 'The greatest fighter in Valley of the Moon'. Naga's younger brother, Platinum was quite jealous. So he challenged me for a duel...," Sotara stopped for a while, "And you won?" Aleu asked, "Yes, I won. I know his weakness as I know how he fight, he was careless about dodging, blocking any of my attack, that's make him lost...," Sotara stopped again with an anxious face, "Is there something wrong, Sotara?" asked Aleu, "Yes, there is. A problem is, Platinum knows where I live, so you must be aware of him. He may not good at defensive, but he is still a great one, though," Sotara said. "Don't worry about me, Sotara. I can take care of myself," Aleu said. "I'm glad to hear that. I'll go to the lake behind the cave, wait here, I'll be back soon," Sotara said and walked out of the cave.
    Two minutes later. Aleu, who waited in the cave could see a grey Herrerasaurus walked toward her, "Where is Sotara?" the Herrerasaurus asked, Aleu took a step back, "Wh-What do you want?" she asked, "I've got Naga's order to take him back to the pack... now!" a grey Herrerasaurus said, Aleu took an another step back, "Why? He can't force Sotara to join his pack," said Aleu, a Herrerasaurus walked around her in circle, "I know he can't, if he can, Sotara will never get out of the meeting area. But I can, and I will force him to go back to the pack. Get out of my way!" he said, Aleu growled, "What? I said get out of my way. Or do you want to hurt?" a Herrerasaurus asked and stand on guard, prepared to kill. "You want to fight me, not her, Platinum." Sotara said from the front of the cave, "Sotara," Platinum said and ran to Sotara, and a fight of the two greatest Herrerasaurus began again.


Chapter 6 : Time for revenge.
    Ten minutes later, Platinum leaped at Sotara throat, but Sotara dodged his attack and striked Platinum with his head. Platinum got up and bit on Sotara's back, and he threw Sotara to the cave wall, Platinum walked to Sotara, "This time, I will finish you, Sotara," he said. Sotara quickly got up and bit on Platinum's throat and threw him to the cave entrance, "Get out of here!" Sotara roared, and Platinum slowly walked out of the cave.
    Back to Nome, Balto began to tire of finding his daughter, "Balto, this is the third day you find Aleu without a rest, I think you should...," Glace said. "No Glace, I'll not stop until I could find her," Balto said, Glace let out a sigh, "Well, I know you would say that. I've found someone who can decrease the strangeness of this silver thing, or maybe he would help us find Aleu. All right, you can come out," she said, and a light brown wolf walked out of a little corner of the town, "What's this, Glace?" asked Balto, "Balto, this is Topaz, he is the another one who saw a silver hole, and Topaz, this is Balto, his daughter disappeared in a silver hole, please tell him about what happened in your cave last night," said Glace, "Well, last night, I was going to sleep. But suddenly, there was a strange silver object appeared in front of me. I was afraid that it might be dangerous to me, so I ran to Nome to find someone who can help me on this. And when I arrived the town, I saw Glace stood there alone, so I asked her about the silver thing, and lucky for me, she knew the silver hole, and as she knew that I saw it too, she asked me to talk to you and see if I can help," Topaz told Balto about the silver thing. "So, will you help?" asked Balto, "Oh! Yes, I will help you find your daughter," Topaz said. "Thanks, Topaz. But you can't help me here," Balto said, "Why?" asked Topaz, "Because there is a group of dogs in the town. They can and will kill you if you are seen in the town," said Balto, "Okay. So, if I can find anything new, I'll try to tell you," Topaz said before he walked back to the forest.
    "Platinum?" Naga asked as Platinum returned to the pack, "Hey! What happened to you, brother. Where are these injuries come from?" he asked, Platinum lowered his head, "Sotara," he said in anger, "You fight him, again?" asked Naga, Platinum nodded. "Don't worry, brother. I know how to take a revenge on him. Just do what I said. Tonight, we'll start the first step...," said Naga
    That night, Platinum came to Sotara's cave again and walked to the room that Aleu was, she was asleep, "How easy," Platinum thought and bit on Aleu's throat, without any voice came out, she was hit hard on the ground and that made her become unconscious, and Platinum carried her out of the cave.
    In the next morning, Sotara woke up and going to go to Aleu's room. "Sotara! Sotara!" before he could go to there, someone from outside called him. "Nebbia? What are you doing here?" as Sotara walked out and saw a female stood there. "Sotara...," Nebbia said with an uneasy face. "What's wrong Nebbia? Can I help you?" asked Sotara, "No, Sotara. I don't need your help. But Aleu is in trouble now," Nebbia said. "What!?" Sotara asked in shock as he heard Nebbia's word, "What happened to her Nebbia!? Tell me what happened!? Sotara asked in anger. "Don't be hasty, Sotara. Listen. Last night, Platinum came here and took Aleu to the pack. And he said he would kill her if you...," before Nebbia could finished, Sotara calmly said, "We don't have time to talk, Nebbia. Let's go," and they two ran to Naga's pack....
    About two hours later, Sotara and Nebbia arrived the pack location. But too late for them, most of the Herrerasaurus, including Naga, were killed with a dreadful injuries. Sotara looked around for the survivors. And then, he saw one, "Platinum!" he said loudly and ran to a survivor, and lie down beside him. "Platinum, Platinum, tell me what happened," said Sotara. "Fogo," Platinum let out a short word. "Fogo," Sotara said silently, but in anger, "Where is Aleu?" he asked
    "Fogo had just take Aleu away," said Platinum. "How could I go to where Fogo lives!?" Sotara asked with a little anger. "You just go to the south of here, you'll see a mountain there, climb the mountain and you'll see Fogo's cave. He lives there with some of his subordinates," said Platinum.
    Sotara got up from the ground, "Nebbia. I want you to find a safety place for Platinum to live until he's okay," he said and quickly ran to the south. "Wh...what about you?" Nebbia shouted. "I'll go to Fogo's cave and bring Aleu back," Sotara shouted back, "Sotara! Wait!" Nebbia shouted, but too late, Sotara was too far to hear her.
    Nebbia let out a sigh, "I'm so worry about him, Platinum. There are a hundred of Postosuchus there, Sotara couldn't...," said she. "Don't worry, Nebbia. There are just a few Postosuchus there, the other live in the other places.... But you can leave me here and go help him," Platinum interrupted, Nebbia stared at him, "It's okay, Nebbia. Sotara is a good Herrerasaurus, he must live on. Just leave me, I'll be okay," Platinum said. "No, Platinum. I can't leave you here alone.... Come on. My friend, Sorra live in the cave, not far from here, I'll leave you with her," said Nebbia.
    Aleu woke up, and she found herself in an unfamiliar place, "What's happened? Where am I?" she asked in her mind. "Aleu, Aleu," someone called her silently, she turned to where the voice came, "Sotara!" she said happily, "Shh... Aleu. We're in the Postosuchus' cave," said Sotara.
    "Yes! You're in my cave, the Postosuchus' cave. And you may not go out, alive," the another creature said from the inside of the cave. Sotara snarled, "Fogo," he said angrily. "Well. You know me, and you are the only Herrerasaurus here. Did you know what happened to the largest Herrerasaurus pack in two years ago...," Fogo said and chuckled evilly. Sotara roared out loudly, "How couldn't I know!?" he asked in anger, "Hundreds of Herrerasaurus died that day...," he said, "But you know, Fogo? One Herrerasaurus in the pack had survived, that's me, Sotara, the greatest Herrerasaurus in Valley of the Moon. And today is the time for revenge!" Sotara said and leaped to Fogo, but he was hitted by Fogo's tail before he could reach Fogo.
    "I don't believe it. Is this a greatest....?" Fogo chuckled, "You're not my match. My followers, kill it," said Fogo. Sotara got up from the ground and let out a chuckle, "Look outside, Fogo. All of your followers were killed. And you'll be the next one, Fogo," he said and ran to

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October 04, 2008
Usa Male
Balto and dinosaurs. Very unique, I must say.
And congrats on making artist of the day. Hey, that rhymes!

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October 04, 2008
it ish cool
write more!

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October 04, 2008
prett good mate

August 30, 2008
Thailand Male
Uh.... I'm sorry, everyone. About Nebbia's color. She's dark brown,
not light.... Sorry again...




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