through there, "Really!?" she asked with a sudden excitement in her tone, "Yes"... "YAY!" She yelled as they both turned down the path that was made of shards of tree bark and shards of oak trees, the smell of of pine was carried all along the path they walked, "Grrrr.... are we there yet?" She asked more annoyed.. "No not yet, but almost" Lunar replied as he looked at her while they both walked to the pine scented path, "ah, here we are" Lunar said while using his hands to move the arched tree branches that reviled a pure white water fountain with a Wonderful princess looking figure with it holding a goblet with an odd curvy rune around it, and three big looking stones that had no color because the stature of pure white stone with beautiful sparkling water falling out of the goblet into the bigger body of water that was below the goblets rim, there was also a wolf she was petting while her other hands was draining the goblet, "Wow, that is beautiful" They both ran to the fountain and sat on it's ledge and as as soon as Lunar put his hand down on the rim, he felt something like writing that wasn't smooth, "huh..." Lunar looked at where his hand was placed, "Hmm.. neat, there's writing here" "What does it say?" Rose said while getting up and admiring the Fountain.., He looks at the writing and sees that it's all in weird symbols that he could not read, "uh, I can't read it, it's in a weird kind of writing"...... Rose looks at Lunar while walking closer to him and looks down at the weird writing, "What the hell kind of writing is that?..."You got me...." Rose leans over and touches the writing and moments later her skin turns a pale chock white and is ice cold, "Rose!!" he yells as she starts to jerk her head and body, and starts twitch extremely fast "ROSE!! wake UP!!!!" Lunar yelled.............
Ever since that day, Rose got used to that happening, we call it (Trance) and the more it happened, the more she could see images and more clearly as well, Lunar and Rose returned to the fountain once a week, like they are now, 3 years later.
      Rose and Lunar both sat on the rim of the pure white fountain, "Do you still remember that day?..... Roses nodded in a yes movement, Lunar looked at his reflection in the crystal clear water and started to think, "Lunar, it's getting late, I think we should leave..... Lunar lost in thought and didn't answer, Rose heard a twig snap and looked quickly behind her, she law a pure white wolf just sitting there, "Uh.. Lunar.. please lets go, now" Rose said in a very scared tone, "Lunar!!" She said very loudly, "What?" He looked in the direction she was and saw this beautiful white wolf with pure dark blue eyes that held a ferce gaze that stayed locked onto Lunar as he looked back, The Wolf started walking towards them, Lunar pulled out his pocket knife and swung fast but the wolf kept walking toward them....."Lunar do something"...... The wolf sprung at Lunar and grabbed his knife and landed on the other side of the fountain with the knife still in the wolf's mouth, "What the hell?" The wolf glared at them and swung his head and the knife flew fast into one of the near by trees, The wolf still glared at them while making it's way to the front of the fountain, Lunar watched as the wolf walked to the front of the fountain and sat while it glaring into Lunar's eyes, "Please.. lets go now" Rose said while the wolf's eyes flashed and started glowing silver, Rose fell to the ground and Lunar stood there, Lunar closed his eyes and opened then moments later and the wolf was gone, Rose snapped out of Trance with tears rolling down her face, Lunar looked at her, "What's wrong?...."I saw.. I saw" Rose replied very shuddery and scared, "You saw what? Lunar said a worried tone, "I saw flames, I saw horses carrying soldiers and the soldiers were slaughtering innocent people, there blood was being shed on the ground, on near by structures, and the shines of the soldier's blades, I saw the blood run down most of there blades and sparks of other soldiers fighting back and smoke and huge flames of buildings being serried in flames of sin, and the dark one w w with ahhh with wings" Rose said very scared and more and more tears fell down her face, Lunar holds her tight and wipes the tears away, "I think we should get back home" Lunar said, Rose nodded as they both got up and walked down the path they came here on, Lunar stops and listens, "What?" Rose asks, Lunar's eyes widen, "Hoof beats", They both ran down the path and saw horses with soldiers heading down the main road "Oh sh*t" Lunar said in a whisper while watching and hearing the thundering horses stampeding down the main road, "Wait a sec, they are heading to our village" Lunar grabs her arm and runs down the main road after the soldiers pass, as they run they see a huge winged like shadow on the ground race forward towards the village, they both stop and look up, but it was so fast that by the time they looked up, it had already passed.

They ran until they were close enough to see huge scorching flames rape the village and scorch many of there lives, what ever the flames did not kill, the soldiers did, Lunar and Rose ran faster seeing more of the flames and sudden sparks of swords clashing, and the villagers blood being shed and spilt on the ground, the soldiers fight was pure evil, the villagers didn't have any chance in hell to win this fight, "D*MNIT!" Lunar yelled and ran even closer to town, "Stop!" Rose said, "Your going to get killed" Rose yelled again, "I have too" Lunar said and runs closer and closer to the town, with his heart burning in anger and rage, Rose ran after Lunar and they both stopped at the gates which were scorched in flame, they both could feel the heat of each flame, they both could feel the darkness in each sin filled flame, most of the buildings were in flames, some fell to the ground, very few were still stand, and screams of pain filled both of there ears and they noticed that both of there homes were still intact, they ran dodging blades and arrow's and finally made it across the blood shed battle field and more smoke rose filling the area with darkened grey clouds that chocked many when they breathed in, "You get your family i'll get mine" Lunar said in a hurry, "Right" Rose replied while running into her home yelling and looking for her parents, Lunar walked into his home doing the same, but no answer, Lunar went upstairs and saw his father holding his mother, "Mother, Father" Lunar ran to them, "Lunar get out of here, NOW!" Lunar looked shocked and saw his father grab his sheath and pulled out his sword and ran outside to fight, "Father NO!" Lunar yelled, his mother grabbed him, "Lunar, you know I love you, but you have to go" Lunar's mother said, 'No im not leaving without you"..... "you were always a strong caring boy, but now it is time to go" Lunar's mother said and gave him something wrapped in a scruffy designed cloth, "Here, take this and go"... Lunar got up and headed for the stairs and he looked back at his mother, "I love you mother" He said while tears filled his eyes and smoke burns on his cheeks.. "Goodbye my son" She said with a smile and Lunar walked down the stairs and across the hallway to the door, a huge axe shatters the door and Lunar falls backwards in fright, he gazed up at a huge load of armor and the refection of flames were easily noticeable flaring across his armor, The man in armor picks up his axe and swings at Lunar as he is on the aground, but Lunar movies his legs so the axe misses him and shatters through the floor, Lunar got up and looks around, he notices the window behind him and makes a run for it while the guy in armor swung his axe madly shattering the stairs and walls while running after Lunar, he jumps through the window just before the axe hits him, Lunar got up and run around to the front and into Rose's home to find her, 'Rose!" Lunar yelled..... "Im here" Rose said while running to Lunar, The flames now spread to to both Lunar's home and Rose's Home, they both ran up the stairs and heard huge echoing foot steps behind them as the big axe guy was fallowing them, "D*amn" Lunar said while grabbing Rose's arm and ran down the hall on the second floor to the end where a huge window lead outside, they heard the foot steps getting louder and louder, Lunar grabs a near by chair and shatters the window as the shards reflect the flickers of the scorching flames as they fall to the floor, "I am going to lower you out ok" ... "Wait what about you?" Rose said very worriedly, "I will come after" Lunar said as he lowered Rose to the landing, the steps were getting even louder and louder as Lunar looked back he saw the huge axe guy again glaring at him, Lunar lowers her and she jumps off the landing while the huge axe guy ran swinging his axe tearing the walls apart, Lunar jumps out the window and hits the landing hard and rolls off and hits the ground, "Are you ok" Lunar said... "Yeah im fine" replied rose, they both got up and ran back to the gate when they got surrounded by soldiers, they both looked at all of the soldiers standing around them with there swords out, one of the soldiers grabbed Rose "Rose!" Lunar yelled but was held so he couldn't move while he saw the soldier who had Rose rode off down the main road, "No" Lunar said with a few tears falling from his face, "Where are you taking her?" Lunar asked but felt a sudden pain and his vision went blurry, then went black...............
Lunar woke up 10 hours later to see the smoke and his village in rubble and bodies with blood stains and wounds laying on the ground, through windows, Lunar got up and looked around at his village scorched to the ground, Lunar walked around as the sun was up to see if he could find any survivors, but none, Lunar fell to his knees "WHY? DA*MNIT WHY!!!!!" He yelled with tear filled eyes, a few minutes later he saw something sparkle so he got up and went to it's location, Lunar moved







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January 01, 2007
I will, and thats only the first chapter, I well havn't been
able to finnish the second chapter yet because of a hospital
thing, but I plan to finnish it soon and im sorry for the
huge dilay

December 11, 2006
Uk Female
SPC
Love the story!
keep it up!

November 27, 2006
Ok thanks Aljan^^ and yes ofcorse I will, as soon as I get
passed this stupid writers block....

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November 24, 2006
This is a good beginning to a possible book that can be
published. Keep writing and I look forward to your next
chapter!

November 17, 2006
Usa Female
I hope you know that "Everwish" should be a book you publish
and not on a website. That was amazing! I can't believe it!
you are an awsome(Not the nmber 8 by the way. Just in case
you know serbian) and I want you to keep writing!

November 17, 2006
Usa Female
I hope you know that "Everwish" should be a book you publish
and not on a website. That was amazing! I can't believe it!
you are an awsome(Not the nmber 8 by the way. Just in case
you know serbian) and I want you to keep writing!

November 17, 2006
Usa Female
I hope you know that "Everwish" should be a book you publish
and not on a website. That was amazing! I can't believe it!
you are an awsome(Not the nmber 8 by the way. Just in case
you know serbian) and I want you to keep writing!

October 17, 2006
Uk Female
Woah! Brilliant!!!

October 12, 2006
Uk Female
SPC
ONE word- AWESOME!!!!!!

September 22, 2006
Australia
That was brillant

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