A New Beginning

Author : Niki-RHP

Date sent : September 20, 2006

Rating : G (Everyone)

Description : Lavida, a pregnant wolf walked slowly out of breath and desperate trying to make it to her den. Lavida was in terrible pain for a mad wolf named Jager tried to kill Lavida because he wanted the baby Lavida was pregnant with and give the baby to Jager after she had the baby. But Lavida said no and so he tried to kill her. Then Jager fell into water and drowned that night. That night Lavida had her baby but not long after that Lavida died. Lavida named the girl baby Tylan. Tylan survived off of the milk her mother, Lavida had in her after she died.

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A New Beginning
By Niki-RHP

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March 31, 2011
Good story! I love it!

October 23, 2007
Uk Female
It's good but this is all the story actully was because you
put the rest in the thing that explains the story

Since Tylan was very young when her mother died. Tylan
would have probably died. But a miracle happened and Tylan
survived for 3 months. Tylan learned on her own when she was
only 3 months old to swim, hunt, howl, climb, and stay away
from humans. Tylan was a miracle.

Tylan looked
just like her mother. Blue eyes, brown body, and white
muzzle, tail, and all 4 legs. Tylan also acted like her
mother. A quick thinker, slik movement, fast runner,
playfull but a little shy at the same time, a unique way of
doing things, as sly as a fox, and she was always in
competition with the boys.

Once Tylan grew to
the age of 5 months old she started to wonder what was
beyond what she could see and she started to want to meat
new people other than herself. So she decided to leave her
den for good and go somewhere new.


July 26, 2007
Usa Male
IIt would have been better if you had expanded on it some.
Maybe a little dialogue somehow or something?

Guest
Guest
February 25, 2007
good story write more




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