Balto's fur rushed around him as he ran with Dingo, Aleu and Kodi. He felt his paws slip on the mud and Balto fell down. He began to roll down a hill.

  "DAD!" screamed his pups. Balto felt his body fling off of a cliff. His paw hit a ledge, as he rolled off of that!

  He felt his body land in the middle of a river. The current swept his body away. Balto's head slammed against a rock and he was out....

 

 Balto woke up to see a black and white malmute with peircing ice blue eyes above him.

  "Steele," he growled. "What happened?"

  "Balto, Balto, Balto, Balto," Steele chuckled. "You hit your head." Steele kicked a rock at Balto's head and Balto blinked.

  "Who are you?" he asked. "I neeed meat!" Steele pulled a carribou to Balto and Balto began to rip at it. He then looked at Steele. Balto's eyes seemed to start to fade in and out.

  "I am your best friend, Steele," said Steele. "A few dogs hurt me and I want you to get them back for me. Could you do it?"

  "Who?" Balto snarled. "I'll rip them to shreds!"

  "A wolfdog named Aleu and a husky named Jenna," Steele growled.

 

  To be continued.... Will Balto do it? If he took too many hits to the head, will Balto ever be the smae again?



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August 12, 2007
Usa Female
Uh oh............

June 29, 2007
Female
Thanks, Dragon Tamer! By the way, sorry that it didn't have
enough detail. I think that the next part is better.

June 29, 2007
Usa Male
Oh, man, that is LOW (what Steele pulled, I mean). The only
thing I can think of that it needs is more detail. The way
it is now, Steele seems to just walk up and have that plan
out of nowhere. Good plot, wolfcall!

June 29, 2007
Female
Geeze. You don't have to bow. Anyway, I'm SO glad that
you enjoyed it and BOW DOWN TO ME!! Wait a minute, I don't
want that! just kidding. . Thanks for reviewing! The
next part will be up soon!

June 28, 2007
Usa Female
TYPE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M
BEGGING!!!




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