i so wanna read it but im only twelve!i so wanna read it but im only twelve!DURN!

Ok,I love it love you.another pat on the head.good cat.I feel bad for dingo.I mean dakota basicly killed his own brother!

really big fan love it love you!! love your book!

i wish i could think of ideas like you do from Tovah9988

wow this one's sooo sad! but it was really good to!!

Sadness T_T

I have seen a picture of the red and white (male) version of
Aleu and in the pictures, his name is "Yukon".
Sweeet
fanfics! Keep up the good work! Nice images too!

I love this story!!! It is soooooooooo great!!

Good fic. I felt bad for Dingo but how was he supposed to
know he was fighting his own brother eh. As for Dakota, he
couldn't have known but now he's following in his father's
pawprints by becoming a sled dog. Nice! Saba finds happiness
with Iron but it seems a little too good to be true. Ah
well. Anyway great story!

Dakota fought his own brother? Did Dingo just...die!? My mom is NEVER going to allow me on BaltoSource again! G'bye everyone! It was way too violent for my taste. I'm 12 and haven't been exposed to rated R stuff.

Very nice story. Very different form the others, but in a good way.

My absolute favorite fic of yours! I loved how you switched the narration around and changed the names; a wonderful touch. Please keep writing!

Dakota killed his own brother! Wouldn't
He recognize Dingo?

That was so sad!

Not bad I saw you post something like this in fanart central only the part you kept out are Aleu and Kodi. I say Aleu's story would have been the best if you added what happened to her.

I feel...depressed...I'm swimming deeper in the big pot of...spiraling depression...it was bad enough, losing my best penpal (on another site).

The story sounds like a diary, or the three are being interviewed and telling their story. Was that ur intention, or did it just happen?

no jenna is mine, good fan fic

aleu is mine

If Dingo hadn't have died I would have rated it 5 stars....
If they found out they were brothers I would read it again
and again, but it was till ok...

I DID pay attention to the warning. It said SLIGHT animal abuse, so I thought it wouldn't be that bad, but dog fights and Dingo getting shot in the head-isn't slight abuse!

eh, good, but did you have to say that Dingo got killed? you could have said he got badly hurt, but not killed... but like you said in the warnings. a part from that, it was wicked!!!

LOVES IT!!!it is the best.And the reddest race.

that was a great fan fic i felt sorry for Dingo when he was killed by his own brother and you're right drama makes good out of a story can't wait for your next fan fic!

wow, that one was really good, though that's yet another way of animal cruelty. Im not saying you're being cruel to animals, im just saying, the dog fights to the death thing. I can't see what kind of enjoyment you can get from training your dog to be a rabid, then throwing him into a circle where, eventually, he's going to be ripped apart. I didn't expect anything like that, Dingo was killed by his own blood brother. . . The Saba/Iron part was nice.
Sorry to be negative, but the only bad thing i saw was it seemed kinda rushed. Still good work though.

Thats sad i cant believe dingo died

Bravo!! Very well done! I really enjoyed reading it. The Saba/Iron relationship was very nice. I felt soo bad for Dingo. Getting killed by Dakota?!? You had a lot of drama there! I'm looking forward for your next fanfic!!

What do you mean, what you write about Kodi, people wouldn't like? Anyway, im not saying this fic is bad. Far from it. Just rushed. Like you could have added more detail about Dakota's training to be a sled dog, stuff like that. oh, well. Ive favoured you. Can't wait to read your next one. But it looks like ive got plenty others here to read as well.

i liked that story but i didn't like what had happen to dingo and dakota it was really good but it does give a point to the readers about how cruel alot of people can be and that was a great idea to put that in a story,and inform about what really goes on.

awsome but sad i realy liked it just the dingo and dakota was sad.