Cool story. I like the ghost of christmas past joke. LOL

it was really emotional & touching great work

I really like this fanfic! your on my favs! keep writing

nice story man

I like it a lot ^^ Great story

The part where Steele approached Princess really got me, and
the main plot in the last half is genious. Dragon Tamer
told me about your story in the forums saying that it was
very familiar to a pic I drew. I had to read it for myself
and... wow... what a scary coincidence. Come see for
yourself in my art gallery.

The first half is good. I'll have to read the rest when I
get the chance.

hey it was awsome i sat down and read it when i got home
from church it was awsome

I love it! It's really cute!

Lovely story, although I found a few things somewhat
troubling about it. I'll PM you.