A Second Chance: Dusty

Author : redwolf03

Date sent : September 14, 2006

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Description : Dusty, Balto's youngest son, is having trouble finding his voice in a world that seems so harsh... Story idea (c) Pirkka, Idea variations (c) redwolf03. Thanks for giving me the idea to make this fic come alive, Pirkka! I couldn't have done it without you.

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A Second Chance: Dusty
By redwolf03

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March 14, 2007
Poland Male
I’ve read all ASC series. Overall note: stunning (the best is
Dusty’s part).

December 02, 2006
Usa Male
I totaly loved it!-Carolina Wolf

September 16, 2006
A finale? What would the story idea be for that? I couldn't
think of one, but I know you could, 'cause you have
talent!

I like Ralph's line of "I will live to
my next meal...I will live to my next meal."

What other stories will you have up your sleeve?

September 16, 2006
Usa Female
To Pirkka: I meant to make Dusty talk like that. It was just
part of the scene. I would never use improper grammar
otherwise. Thanks for pointing it out, though.

September 16, 2006
Usa Female
Amazing. The only word to describe it. I can't wait for more
of your stories! Your writing style is awesome!

September 15, 2006
Finland Male
MSDF/SES Paranormal Creator
Was good fanfic though. Some grammar I noticed for example
two negative words in one sentence which isn't allowed by
the rules of English "I take no (censored) from nobody" that has
two no words, no and nobody if I'm correct

September 15, 2006
Wow, now you have the sirise done?? It's hard to think
about! What will you write about now?

September 15, 2006
Usa Male
Red, that was definately worth the wait. Great work!

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