Description : Dusty, Balto's youngest son, is having trouble finding his voice in a world that seems so harsh...
Story idea (c) Pirkka, Idea variations (c) redwolf03. Thanks for giving me the idea to make this fic come alive, Pirkka! I couldn't have done it without you.
To Pirkka: I meant to make Dusty talk like that. It was just
part of the scene. I would never use improper grammar
otherwise. Thanks for pointing it out, though.
Was good fanfic though. Some grammar I noticed for example
two negative words in one sentence which isn't allowed by
the rules of English "I take no (censored) from nobody" that has
two no words, no and nobody if I'm correct
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Dusty’s part).
Wolf
think of one, but I know you could, 'cause you have
talent!
I like Ralph's line of "I will live to
my next meal...I will live to my next meal."
What other stories will you have up your sleeve?
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part of the scene. I would never use improper grammar
otherwise. Thanks for pointing it out, though.
Husky
of your stories! Your writing style is awesome!
in)
two negative words in one sentence which isn't allowed by
the rules of English "I take no (censored) from nobody" that has
two no words, no and nobody if I'm correct
about! What will you write about now?
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