WHAT TIME IS IT
(PART THREE)
"Well I guess we're lucky,"Jenna said as Jamie got up. "Crap, my integra,"Jamie yelled, "How am I supposed to get around." Man why do I always ruin peoples days Balto thought to himself. Meanwhile in 1929, "Blackjack, come here," Aleu yelled. "What is it," he asked. The steel box was back, the men stepped out. "Who are we looking for this time,"one of them asked. "Blackjack, what a stupid name,"the other guy said. "Blackjack get out of here," Aleu yelled. Blackjack ran off, but Aleu kept listening to their conversation.
"This was harder than the time we captured that other one, what was his name, uhh Balo." "No you idiot his name was Balto." "Well why would you care so much about his stinkin name,"one of them screamed. "Why did I even pick you as a partner, 1st you bring an extra dog into the future, 2nd you leave your gun in the car while that mutt breaks my freakin hand,"the other guy yelled. "I hated bringing them into the future,"the first guy said with a sorrowful voice.
Mom and Dad are in the furture Aleu thought. Maybe, just maybe. Aleu couldn't think any longer as she jumped in the steel box hit a button and it dissapeared. "That mutt took our time machine,"the first guy said. "Ya think I don't know that,"the second one screamed. "Well guys, I don't know,"Jamie said, " They were at a car dealership. "Should I buy the nissan skyline or the mazda rx-7,"Jamie asked. I don't know anything about cars, I'll just pick Balto thought. He pointed to the rx-7. "Okay boy, I'll take the rx-7,"Jamie said as he payed the salesman the money. He handed Jamie the keys.
Jamie, Balto, and Jenna climbed in and they were off. Jamie blared Linkin Park on the CD player. "What is that," Jenna tried to yell over the loud music. "This is the 1995 version of music,"Balto responded. Jamie stopped at a gas station and the steel box appeared in front of them, Jamie was in the mini mart so he didn't notice. Aleu walked out of the box. "Aleu," Balto and Jenna said at the same time as they walked over. Jamie came out of the store and saw them get in the box. "Good-bye boy,"Jamie yelled. Bye Jamie, Balto thought. The box dissapeared. 'Who was that,"Aleu asked. "A friend,"Balto responded with a respective tone. As the box appeared back in Nome everyone was inside the house. They walked in the door. "You're back," they all said. I'll miss you Jamie.
Note: Jamie and Blackjack are my characters and cannot be used without my authorization.
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but the storyline is very interesting. You did, however,
ignore a lot of possibilities.