Revenge is sweet
i agree with saphire_saphirilla too!

DISGUSTING!! I agree with saphire_saphirilla

OK, this is TOTALLY SICK! I know we're supposed to give
constructive criticism, so here it is: the only thing even REMOTELY believable about the characters was the fact that Kodi felt guilty about it. Anyway, I've never followed the Dusty+Ralph pairing idea. No way Dusty's dumb enough to go for a wimp like him. Here is my honest advice. Don't write like this again.

great story. make a sequel, pleace

im sorry, you're a good writer, but i have to agree with
Dragon Tamer on this one.

One question: how could Dusty have not known Kodi was doing
that to her if she was awake??? Although I am glad to see a
more interesting view on Kodi, I thought that was kind of
weird that she didn't know.

Hmm.... I'm not sure what to say here. It was well
written, but although Kodi did regret what he'd done it
didn't seem like enough to me. In any case, write on!