Balto was very confused. Jerard took Balto's ears and looked him directly in the eyes. "Listen boy. Star. She did have an infection in her leg. It spread and that was what was making her body go all crazy. In the middle of the night, she howled and the infection go so bad that........" Jerard paused. Balto was waiting. "she died. Last night. I am sorry boy." Balto took a minute to get the shock to hit him. Then he tore away from Jerard and he ran. He didn't know where he was going. He just ran. He thought about all the things and people he lost. He had lost Jenna. He had lost Tala. He had lost Boris from a gun accident with hunters. And now he lost his daughter. Balto ran out of the hospital and to the boiler room. He layed down on the blanket that he had dragged there a long time ago. He didn't care about anyone anymore. He only cared about Jerard, Rosie, and Mary. He didn't know what to do. He couldn't trust any animal anymore. He didn't realize that the whole time he was running and thinking that he was crying. He cryed so hard for his Star. He wished that he hadn't had made her go into the sled dog team tryouts. If he hadn't had tryed to make her, none of this would have happened. Even though it was only about lunch time, Balto closed his eyes. He only thought about who he had lost.

The End



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SteeleAndJenna
SteeleAn
dJenna
January 28, 2011
:p YAY! I love this story. *FAVES* It includes my fave couple too. :P F.A.N.T.A.S.T.I.C!

May 05, 2009
Philippines Female
ya know that i love da character steele,and also the couple baltoxjenna.
but BBBAAAAAADDDDDDD EEEENNNDDIIINGGGG!:o :mad: :o :mad:

March 17, 2009
Newzealand
this fanfic reminds me of a song called "Dead and gone" because of ovious resons.

May 17, 2009
Australia Female
It was an interesting story. But you need to develop the plot a little more. Though it was sad, the plot with Star was interesting and made me read on. And while I have nothing major against JennaXSteele, I think you didn't read far enough into it and that it would have been a better story without it.

All in all I would rate is a 3/5.

Guest
Guest
September 17, 2007
OMG!Steele and Jenna?!No way! But I still like you
fanfics *faves*

Guest
Guest
August 20, 2007
is there going to be a second one?

June 28, 2007
Usa Female
OMG!!!!! Poor Balto

May 01, 2007
Female
SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAYBE YOUR SADEST! YOU SHOULD MAKE A
SEQUEL!

April 22, 2007
Usa Male
You just loooove soap operas, don't you? Jenna being with
Steele is ABSOLUTELY ridiculous. I know I gave you the
go-ahead for a story using Luna, but these are giving me
SERIOUS second thoughts. Frankly, I don't think we see
eye-to-eye when it comes to values, so I doubt my characters
would be compatable with your style of writing. Sorry, but I
think I'll have to retract my consent for now unless there's some improvement. BTW, I realize that this is a rather harsh way to answer your question "does anyone like my stories?" You've got potential as a writer, but you have a looooong way to go.

Guest
Guest
November 26, 2007
awww




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