YAY! I love this story. *FAVES* It includes my fave couple too. F.A.N.T.A.S.T.I.C!

ya know that i love da character steele,and also the couple baltoxjenna.
but BBBAAAAAADDDDDDD EEEENNNDDIIINGGGG!

this fanfic reminds me of a song called "Dead and gone" because of ovious resons.

It was an interesting story. But you need to develop the plot a little more. Though it was sad, the plot with Star was interesting and made me read on. And while I have nothing major against JennaXSteele, I think you didn't read far enough into it and that it would have been a better story without it.

All in all I would rate is a 3/5.

OMG!Steele and Jenna?!No way! But I still like you
fanfics *faves*

is there going to be a second one?

OMG!!!!! Poor Balto

SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAYBE YOUR SADEST! YOU SHOULD MAKE A
SEQUEL!

You just loooove soap operas, don't you? Jenna being with
Steele is ABSOLUTELY ridiculous. I know I gave you the
go-ahead for a story using Luna, but these are giving me
SERIOUS second thoughts. Frankly, I don't think we see
eye-to-eye when it comes to values, so I doubt my characters
would be compatable with your style of writing. Sorry, but I
think I'll have to retract my consent for now unless there's some improvement. BTW, I realize that this is a rather harsh way to answer your question "does anyone like my stories?" You've got potential as a writer, but you have a looooong way to go.

awww