The Big Mistake

 

 

 

 

One day in the town of Nome everything was normal. The children played on the streets while their parents were working hard for money. Many people came to Nome mainly to get supplies because they wanted to be rich by looking for gold. It seems that the races were still on and Steele was the champion, even though he’s hated by every dog in town. Besides Nome is now an tourist attraction due to Balto.

 

As Balto was walking through the crowd, he was trying to see Jenna and Rosie. Because the three of them were going to go on a picnic. Besides it was an lovely winter and it was almost the time of Christmas. Balto turned to see an smiling Jenna as he headed towards them. “ Hey, Jenna, ” he greeted while smiling at her.

 

Jenna greeted Balto back and smiled as Rosie approached them. “ Hey Balto I’m so glad that your coming to the picnic with us. ” she said as she hugged them both. As they headed off over to find a spot Balto got an glimpse of his lovely daughter, Saba. She seemed to be growing more beautiful each day since she was a pup. Now almost every dog in Nome wanted her, and Saba isn’t afraid to take no for an answer. Besides she almost looked like Jenna, but her eyes where sky blue.

 

Seeing Jenna and Rosie made Saba give an stare. She then turned towards her owner, Lisa who was talking to her friends while eating. Saba smiled and headed towards her while barking because she wanted to have fun with her owner. “ No, Saba! Go away, I’m busy with more important things than playing with you right now. ” Lisa said while pushing her away. Saba lowered her ears and walked away from her master.

 

Ever since she turned an year old it seemed that Lisa had lost interest in her. While walking away she saw her two brothers, Tack and Zack heading up to her. “ Hey Saba what’s with the frown? ” asked Zack while keeping an eye on Tack. Saba looked at Zack, it always seemed easy to tell him about everything since he was her favorite brother. “ Well it seems like Lisa doesn’t want to play with me again. ” she said while giving an sigh.

 

Tack just seemed to give out an cruel laugh. “ Yeah my owner, Tommy did that once but then I showed him. ” he said while grinning. “ Yeah how did you do that, Tack? ” asked Zack while rolling his eyes out of amusement. “ Well let’s see one day I came upon an huge report due the next day. Being myself I decided to rip it up and eat it. It was so funny because the next day Tommy got grounded for an month, now he plays with me non-stop at times. ” answered Tack while grinning at his story. Saba just stared while hearing what he did, maybe if she did that then Lisa would play with her.

 

While Saba said an thanks to Tack she headed towards Lisa once more. “ Saba I told you NO! ” she said. This time Saba ignored her and pounced on her, Lisa was shocked and started to scream. Jenna seeing this mess ran over and pushed Saba off her owner. She then told Saba, “ Come with me missy! ” Saba sightly rolled her eyes and followed her mother.

 

“ Why would you do that to her? ” asked Jenna trying to be mature in the matter. “ Because I am bored and need someone to play with. ” Saba said while getting mad once again. It seemed that her mother and her were starting to argue more often but Jenna seemed to get the best of her. “ Well just because Lisa doesn’t want to play doesn’t mean that you should force them. Besides I’m glad that Rosie is alive, if it wasn’t for your father. ” Jenna said while smiling. Saba then rolled her eyes and glared at her mother.

 

“ Then I wish that Rosie was dead. Then the world would be an better place! ” she yelled as she left with Lisa’s family. Jenna just stood there shocked at her daughter. She was mainly upset, because how could her daughter say such an thing to her. But then Jenna sighed and walked off. " She will just have to get use to it. As always Saba is hard to tame. " she chuckled to herself and headed off to Rosie.

 

While heading back to Jenna she smiled as Balto headed towards her. “ Was it another fight again? ” he asked while looking concerned. Saba has been acting different lately but he didn’t know why. “ Yes, I guess she’s probably just stressed out. ” Jenna said while walking with her love. “ Yeah, stress can do a lot to one person. ” Balto said while looking at the beautiful snow.

 

While the two stared for an moment they were thinking of about certain things. Balto then started to get quiet again since he was thinking about someone. “ Balto, are you wondering how Aleu is? ” asked Jenna while smiling. Balto looked at Jenna and smiled, “ yeah, “ he said while looking at her. Jenna then nuzzled him, “ Don’t worry she is fine, besides she is pack leader now. ” she said while smiling.

 

Balto smiled once again, because Jenna was right about that. Finally before the moment was spoiled Balto nuzzled Jenna back. Kodi then came greeting them, “ Hey dad. So how’s the day so far? ” he asked curious. “ Well, Kodi, so far I was with your mother because we were on a picnic. ” he said while grinning. Kodi nodded and smiled at his parents, when he saw his friends passing by, he decided to follow them.

 

“ I swear it’s not the same with Boris around here. ” Balto said while lowering his ears. Balto missed Boris because he and Stella decided to move on with their lives and leave Nome. Balto still believed that no matter what their lives might be crossed some day into an crazy mess. He then smiled as Jenna looked at him with the most beautiful eyes. But suddenly after Boris left he and Jenna were hardly apart from each other.

 

Finally it turned evening and it was time to go. “ Well Jenna I gotta get going, see you tomorrow, ” Balto said while running towards his home. Jenna smiled and left with Rosie while walking she ran into an group of dogs. “ I am very sorry for running into you. ” said an male dog with an marking of an pumpkin on his back. “ Well that’s okay I wasn’t seeing you walk. ” Jenna said while making an light smile.

 

“ By the way my name is Jack O’ Lantern, ” he said while giving an small bow. He always treated the women with the most respect. Jenna smiled because Jack O’ Lantern was an very nice guy. “ Well, that’s an very unique name, mine is Jenna. ” she replied while looking at his group of dogs. “ Well I guess you gotta get going now, ” he said as he left the park.

 

Jenna just stared as Jack left out of sight. She then reheard Rosie calling her, so she finally went with Roise. Rosie smiled as Jenna approached her, “ Who’s your new friend? ” she asked giggling full of joy. Jenna just smiled as Rosie petted her head, finally they started heading home. While heading home Jenna smiled as the sun settled down to bring the bright moon upon the stars.

 

As the luminous night gave into view Jenna heard noises coming from the outside. “ Balto? ” she questioned while standing up. As she went outside to look around she saw an mysterious figure. It seemed to be more of an female do to that the body was much smaller. “ What are you doing here? ” Jenna asked ready to fight if needed.

 

The figured stared at Jenna and grinned. It seemed like she was looking around for something. Jenna finally ran towards the figure because she wondered if harm would be done. After the figure looked at Jenna she left out of sight. Jenna stopped in her tracks and stared as the figure vanished away.

 

As morning came, Jenna woke up half tired. She was mainly up all last night trying to hunt the figure down. Seeing Rosie Jenna started to bark while wagging her tail, Rosie giggled as she hugged Jenna. “ I’m going over to play with cousin Jack, now you be good Jenna. ” she said as she left the house. Jenna smiled, even though Jack was twenty one he still acted like a kid.

 

Besides he was Zack’s owner, which was indeed a good thing. After David had passed away due to he was murder Jack came in and bought Zack and his friends. Even though Zack didn’t like him at first he started to trust him after the same man tried to kill him. Even though Jack has an fear of white dogs, he was lucky to own Zack since he loved him so much. Besides the two almost had the same personality, except that Jack was an human and Zack wasn’t.

 

Finally as Jenna head outside she saw Jack O’ Lantern once again. “ I didn’t know that you lived around here, ” he said while giving an handsome smile. Jenna smiled at him, Jack was really the ladies man. “ Yeah well I do, ” she answered while looking around for Balto. Jack smiled, “ Well, I just moved here yesterday it seems that I’m the new dog around here. ” he said while grinning.

 

Jenna chuckled as Balto came heading up towards Jenna. Jenna turned to Balto and smiled. “ Well, Jack this is my husband Balto and Balto, this is Jack O’ Lantern. ” she said greeting the two. Jack smiled, “ Well, so this is the famous Balto I heard so much about. It’s an pleasure to meet you. ” Balto smiled, he was use to everyone calling him that now ever since he saved Nome. “ Well, thanks, it seems that your new, mine if I show



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July 04, 2007
Portugal Male
Quite weird and violent, but somehow a bit funny (but not in
the death parts).

August 30, 2006
Usa Female
I have to tell you that is not Jenna at all and Saba would never do anything like that, but you did warn us so I'm sorry but it's my opion

August 26, 2006
Usa Female
thanks I really apperciate the comments

August 22, 2006
I dunno... I have to tell you the truth, but that was really morbid. I don't think Jenna's the type to do things like that.°x°

August 21, 2006
Usa Female
You'll see what happens next time :P

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August 20, 2006
Very interesting story. I think you should have Zack find out possibly in the next story and try to kill Jenna!lol :mad:

August 20, 2006
Usa Female
thanks I really apperciate the comment for this fic

August 20, 2006
Usa Female
Yes and she's coming after us lol

August 20, 2006
Usa Female
Yes and she's coming after us lol

August 19, 2006
Usa Female
*bows* Thank you there is more to come of this Saga and more suspence will keep coming my friends :p

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