The Big Mistake

Author : DW

Date sent : August 19, 2006

Rating : R (Restricted)

Description : Jenna and Saba keep fighting more but as something occurs an line will be crossed that will change lives forever. WARNING IF YOU ARE AN HUGE DEVOTED FAN OF SABA OR JENNA I SUGGEST YOU TO NOT READ THIS FIC. Also if you HATE an RAPE scene don't read the fic as well

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The Big Mistake
By DW

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July 04, 2007
Portugal Male
Quite weird and violent, but somehow a bit funny (but not in
the death parts).

August 30, 2006
Usa Female
I have to tell you that is not Jenna at all and Saba would never do anything like that, but you did warn us so I'm sorry but it's my opion

August 26, 2006
Usa Female
thanks I really apperciate the comments

August 22, 2006
I dunno... I have to tell you the truth, but that was really morbid. I don't think Jenna's the type to do things like that.°x°

August 21, 2006
Usa Female
You'll see what happens next time :P

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Guest
August 20, 2006
Very interesting story. I think you should have Zack find out possibly in the next story and try to kill Jenna!lol :mad:

August 20, 2006
Usa Female
thanks I really apperciate the comment for this fic

August 20, 2006
Usa Female
Yes and she's coming after us lol

August 20, 2006
Usa Female
Yes and she's coming after us lol

August 19, 2006
Usa Female
*bows* Thank you there is more to come of this Saga and more suspence will keep coming my friends :p

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