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Guest
Guest
July 22, 2006
Wow,I love it!Violent,but still awesomje!

October 21, 2007
Brazil Male
Dont you think you exagerated there?

Guest
Guest
October 30, 2007
man this is my favorite fan fic you did I can't stop reading
it...

July 23, 2006
Usa
OMG that is very sad:cry: But still quite good. Man, Kiona's violentlol jk

July 22, 2006
Uk Female
Rock of Ages
Ooh, I love this story, shame it was so short but still totally awesome, I love your fics Cat, +fav

July 22, 2006
Usa Female
Wow that was cool. I like storys that I have to finsh in one day because I can't stop reading till I'm finsh.:P

July 22, 2006
Usa Female
A Lone Wolf
Were you mad when you wrote this?? I like goury things but not THAT goury. It was good wirting tohugh.

July 22, 2006
Usa Female
Oh dear...how would Balto react?

Guest
Guest
July 22, 2006
Hooray for violence!!! This story is entertaining. I just wish it was a little bit longer. But w/e

July 22, 2006
Usa Female
Violent, yet very entertaning!

July 23, 2006
Usa Female
poor Alue! But she shouldn't have don't what she did to Kiona in "It Ends Tonight." I think Alue should have saw that comming. It was still sad thoughlol

July 23, 2006
Usa Male
O.O that was awsome especailly the end lol awosme fic as always

July 24, 2006
Usa Female
Senior Mod
Whee!! Achak is in this one...for a bit, lol. And Yay for violence, I don't really like Alue either. :p

July 24, 2006
Usa Female
OH WOW!
You keep amazing me with your fanfics.

July 24, 2006
Usa Female
AWSOME!!!!!:o that was a GREAT fan-fic Cat!!:P i'm very VERY i'mpressed by how creative you are!man o man that was....WOW..:P

Guest
Guest
July 24, 2006
BWAHAHAHAHAHA ayeeeee LIKE it!!! AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING!!!!! i should maybe do a pic of Kiona and Alue fighting!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA **falls off of chair from laughing like an evil person**

Guest
Guest
July 24, 2006
ROFL! best one yet! KIONA ROCKS! she can kick butt, baby! lol

Guest
Guest
January 09, 2008
Ugh,violent but hehe,I hate Aleu.Bye bye Aleu!

Guest
Guest
May 17, 2009
can you make another Kiona one?

Guest
Guest
January 18, 2008
I really love your fanfics ^^they`re all great ^^ can you
please tell me what happened to the second site of your fic
revenge tastes like blood ???

July 25, 2006
Usa
Great FanFic! I KNEW that Kiona would kick Aleu's butt when she had a chance. But technically, she killed Aleu's butt...lol

Guest
Guest
July 24, 2006
Poor Aleu!

Guest
Guest
July 25, 2006
I love this one and well, Kiona really kicked Alue's behind!(not sure what to say)

July 25, 2006
WOW VERY GOOD!! :P hah i love how kiona killed aleu...aleu is such a brat

July 25, 2006
Usa Female
I'm not a wolf. Kthxbai.
hehe. I love Aleu and I love this fic! My heart was pounding the whole time. *thump thump* lol. It was AWSOME!

Guest
Guest
July 25, 2006
AWSOME FIC!!!!!I HATE Aleu....got what she deserved though....*evil laugh*

Guest
Guest
July 25, 2006
I agree with you RayJ! Aleu is sutch a spoiled whiny brat! :)

Guest
Guest
July 26, 2006
GO KIONA! :) Amzing story! Kiona is cool! I can't wait to read more! :P

July 26, 2006
Usa Male
Belle's Ice River pack
Oh, so THIS is one of those 'other' stories you talked about earlier. (Or...is it?) Well, I enjoyed it anyway. I do like Aleu (she's to be at least a secondary character in my upcoming fics) but in this case, I must say that it served her rightr for what she did. I could use more colorful words to explain the emotions I feel but will abstain, as I find no need to continue.

Write on, Cat! Keep 'em coming!:cool:

July 28, 2006
Uk Female
I loved this story, I wouldn't say I'm a fan of Aleu but I think she is okay but this story is soo kool and the ending was Bril, I love all your stories *FAVZ*:P

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