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Balto Fan Person_45
Balto
Fan
Person_4
5
July 28, 2006
I cant understand how you did that! Alue was a good character. How could you KILL her?!?!:issedoff:

February 17, 2008
Usa Female
love it! You're a great writer: you have great detail in your writing!
And it's okay that your'e not letting me use Kiona in my fic-- I
really apprecate you taking the time to take that up w/me. Anyways, I
love your Kiona stories, and think your'e a really good writer. Great
job * faves* and keep them coming!

Balto Fan Person_45
Balto
Fan
Person_4
5
July 29, 2006
Sorry. I hadnt read the intro. My apologies. Iwas already a little upset about finding out Balto could die inB4... Sorry...

July 30, 2006
Canada Female
woha! that was a good fan fic,lol i need a comment in mine

July 31, 2006
Usa
I found this story just as you said it was in the description. Do you write stories like thse all the time?;) I found it just a bit too harsh and mean, but that is me.

July 31, 2006
Usa Female
I'm not a wolf. Kthxbai.
Cat.. You lied. You said Aleu fans wouldn't like it. And I loved it!

August 01, 2006
That story was a bit gross, if my mum saw it i think she would try to delete this site!
Rating: :icon14: :icon14: :icon13: :icon13:

May 25, 2008
Usa Female
Water Tribe

August 09, 2006
Wow, seems like Kiona is going to be the only surving pup from balto's first litter. Love the story, Aleu totally got what was coming to her LMAO, god i hate her. Kiona is the coolest balto charactor yet =D.

August 08, 2008
Usa Female
So does revenge taste like iron, then? Good fanfic

August 08, 2008
Usa Female
But isn't Faolan one of highland wolf's characters?

Guest
Guest
August 10, 2006
may i do a fanart of this? i REALLY want to >.

Guest
Guest
August 13, 2006
MUWAHHAHA finally ^..^ im not an aleu fan^^:mad:

aniu93
Aniu93
August 16, 2006
:issedoff: HOW COULD YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :cry2:

August 16, 2006
Usa Female
Tibb_wolf -->Shut up!I like alue.But still it was a good story.I liked even though alue died.
aniu93 --> If you don't have somthing nice to say,don't say any thing at all.Even if your body tempeture went up due to rage and hatred.Just don't post offensive comments,and these fights will never happen.

catwhohas14tails --> I'm sorry aniu93 posted such a rude comment,but yur response wasn't any better.next time,pm her so that it isn't made public.Oh and.....great story!!:P

April 12, 2009
Usa Male
I'm not an aleu fan but I don't dislike her, I wouldn't like if she died for real but this was still kinda fun to read. Ultra violent but still a good fanfic, again, wouldn't wanna think that that's what happens for real. 10/10

Guest
Guest
March 28, 2009
I can't stand aleu either and her high pitched voice in the balto movie got on my nerves!!! I thought i was the only one who hated Aleu, im glad she died. great fic. by the way.

August 20, 2006
Slovenia Female
Cool fic! you're a talented writer, ya know.:P btw, can
I draw Kiona? i just have to put (C)CatWhoHas14Tails,
right? ^^

Guest
Guest
August 26, 2006
Whoa.:icon312: Go Kiona!lol I loved this story!:icon40: Especially since I despise aleu, with a fiery red passion. :mad: Awesome story.

Guest
Guest
July 14, 2009
I thought Balto's family was messed up before, and now Aleu is an incestuous lesbian rapist who gets her throat crushed by her sister!!
if you want to know what happened that night check out fanfictionnow.com and look in the movie section under Balto, page 2, title: It ends tonight.

September 06, 2006
Canada Female
Webranker
Awesome fic cat!

September 23, 2006
Australia
I like. your an exellent writer. Great work.

Guest
Guest
September 26, 2006
wow kiona kicks butt! aleu got what was comming to her! your fanfic's are awsomeness!
*adds to faves!*

Kali Rector
Kali
Rector
October 19, 2006
I can not believe that Kiona killed her own sister, Aleu.

October 24, 2006
Usa Male
Cool!Awesome fanfic!Aleu died.

November 22, 2006
Usa Female
I'm not a wolf. Kthxbai.
Ok. That's pretty crappy they made you edit this one. There
was nothing bad about that in my opinion. ><

But it's still an awsome fic. ^^

Guest
Guest
December 09, 2007
Sulfur- Cat isn't a fan of Aleu and she can write whatever
she wants. Not all families are loving and caring with each
other, you know. My aunt's father never cared about her or her family so they had to move away from him. Anyways Cat, I thought it was kind of a good story. lol

Guest
Guest
September 01, 2007
Geez, you really DO hate Aleu!

Guest
Guest
March 06, 2007
Wait a min.This one is dangerous for 9 and less age
kids.Maybe a kid hates Aleu will be happy while reading end
of this and for try enjoy it with killing itself without
want.

March 09, 2007
Usa Female
Aleu deserved that for abusing kiona. LOL

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