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Guest
Guest
December 31, 2009
I want to read this fanfic but I am too young!

December 30, 2009
Usa Male
I've seen all your videos on youtube but when blood and violence gets in with balto thats going to far!

Guest
Guest
November 02, 2009
you are sick hurting alue!

Guest
Guest
September 13, 2009
Oh my god, poor kiona. Aleu just kinda gets on Red and I's nerves:mad:

Guest
Guest
July 07, 2009
OMG why will I get banned if I read it? It's a free world. I can read whatever I want.

June 01, 2009
Usa Female
I find Alue annoying, but the sexual abuse is going a little too far. Otherwise, it was good. A little confusing at times, but good.

April 19, 2007
Uk Female
I like Aleu but I still think this fanfic is cool! Aleu got
what she deserved! A little on the silly side perhaps, but
hey, it worked, and isn't that what a great fic is all
about?

P.S. You should do one where Kodi, Mel
and Dipsy are also killed by Kiona.
P.S.S. Just
kidding!

Guest
Guest
April 24, 2007
Mmm, I am an Aleu fan, but I still like it. Nicely written!
I want more blood!

April 26, 2007
Usa Female
That was a good fic but it was rated G and it has swear
words and "other words" in it too but it was a great
story*Faves*

April 27, 2007
Usa Female
u r a GREAT auther! *favs*

April 27, 2007
Usa Female
Rock of Ages
that story is sort of dark(to me) i like alue but still
i like the story(and smilelys) heh heh heh

Guest
Guest
April 27, 2007
And blood tastes like iron... XD Well anywaysss, I liked it.
Hahaha. Nice little short story about erm, Aleu dying... XD

April 28, 2007
Usa Female
Wow! I'm an Alue fan (well, was a few years ago) but that
story was so awesome!!

April 30, 2007
Usa Female
wonderful. just wonderful

May 05, 2007
Usa Female
This is awesome Cat!

Guest
Guest
March 31, 2007
cool fanfic die aleu die hahahahahaha i hate aleu now i dont
know why but she is becomeing anoying

May 08, 2007
Usa Male
this was such an awesome fic cat. even if i like aleu, i
loved this story

May 12, 2007
Usa Female
loved the story!!!! faves

Guest
Guest
June 08, 2007
that one is soo cool I loved it and it was rank

Guest
Guest
June 12, 2007
Umm... This story was...BIZARRE! Aleu raped Kiona?!? What's
up with that? Or did she just hurt her emotionally? I LOVED
this story, but it's crazy!!!

April 21, 2007
Usa Male
I love the violence XD. Are you going to make a part 2? Or
do you already have one?

April 08, 2007
Usa Female
Looking for one to take me in
I HATED THAT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!

April 06, 2007
Usa Female
Poor Aleu.... O WELL, HAHAHA!!!!!

Guest
Guest
April 15, 2007
Yeah, Jen girl v4, you were warned!

Guest
Guest
April 15, 2007
I read that one. I don't hate Aleu I feel sorry for her but
I still think it was pretty cool. At leats kiona got
something out of it

April 15, 2007
Usa Female
I LOVE that one. I don't hate Aleu or anything but
still I love it.

October 09, 2007
Usa Female
That is cool. I'm not a big fan of Aleu, mainly because of
her voice. My point is, that fanfic is supperific!

Guest
Guest
July 22, 2006
I hate it. I don't like Aleu as much as I used to, but I still don't want her dead. I know a story isn't good wth deaths(in some cases), but for some odd reason, I dont' want Aleu dead. And Saba, good, but I think mine would be btter. I'm already working on her fic, but it'll take awhile:P

Guest
Guest
July 22, 2006
wow Cat im simply amazed. this was probably my fav fanfic so far. i hate Aleu so much so i didn't feel one thing when I was reading it. kudos to you Cat!lol

July 22, 2006
Uk Female
woah that was really good poor Aleu it made me feel abit queezy but that's why i liked it so much.

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