new she was expecting pups soon, but how would that bring danger I nodded still feeling stunned. I decided to not tell her but try to keep her in the camp. I saw her begining to leave, I ran over.

" Snowstorm don't go" I cried urgently.

 The alarm in my voice caused her to whip her head and look at me in surprise. "Hey whats wrong. I'm only going to get a drink"

 " No I thnik you should stay. Please" I suddently felt as if I would never see her again. She licked me in reasurrance.

" Don't worry I'll be back." With that she walked out. I felt as if though I had done a big mistake. I looked up at the glittering stars over my head.

"Oh SpiritClan" I whispered to our Warrior ancestors." I sure hope you know what you are doing."

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I ran excitedly to where I would meet her. We have been seeing each other for months. I finally saw her coming down a hill, her swollen belly swaying. I greeting her with a touch or our noses.

"Hey Aniu"

"You can't call me that anymore"

For a second I thought she was angry wiht me, but i heard no hostility in her voice.

"I'm Snowstorm now. I'm a Warrior" she said proudly.

"Thats really great" I said responded beaming for her

 We sat down and lay our heads against each other, enjoying each other's company. A few minutes passed by and she let out a gasp of pain. I lept to my feet at an instant. 

"Are you okay"

"McKinley...I...I think they're coming"she panted

 "What!" I exclaimed feeling a bolt of electricity go through me "Now!?"

She began to lie down. I licked her flank and was murmuring things to comfort her. She was losing a lot of blood. The first pup came but she seemd too exhausted to take care of it. I like and it it opened its mouth to take a first breath. Three more came and were each alive.

"McKinley" I only just barely heard her.

 I immedieately ran to her side. She seemed to be slipping away

 "Take care of the pups. I love you." she rasped

I shook my head in disbelief  "Don't leave me Snowstorm, I need you here"

"Karti" she wispered very softly, as she lay her head down.

 That was the last word she had ever spoken. I didn't know who or what "Karti" was but she was gone. The truth stabbed at me like a dagger.

"Snowstorm" I gently nudged her not wanting to face the truth. She didn't respond. I raised my head a howled loudly to the whole forest.

"SNOWSTORM!"

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 I buried her at the same spot she died. Her scent was still strong but mixed with the scent of blood.

"Oh Snowstorm what will I do without you"

 She meant everything to me. The sound of whimpering brought me back to earth. I glanced down and saw four bundles. One was pure white like Snowstorm, another was chocolate brown, a third was a light gray/sliver and the fourth was a pale brown. You need a mother was the first thing that came to my mind. Without thinking twice I gently picked up the chocolate grown puppy and rushed to my town. I had to hurry or they'll die.

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 All that Cross Country running has finally paid off, because I sprinted like never before. I arrived at the shipwrecked boat and came bursting in, making Coedae jump in alarm.

 "McKinley whats wrong?"

" I need you to take care of him" I said in a rush, as I gently put down the pup.

 "But why?!"

 " I have no time to explain" I panted "Please Coedae, I have to get to the others"

 "What?!" she exclaimed, her eyes wide "There are more?!"

"Please " I begged.

 She hesitated for a moment. The puppy whimpered loudly. her expression softened. She let out a sigh. "Oh, of course I'll take him" She picked him up and carried it over to the basket and allowed him to suckle at her stomach. I would've wanted to watch him settle, but I ran out to save the rest. The snow crunched beneath my feet, desperatly running towards the forest. I saw my house and halted.

"You dumb-dumb" I said outloud to myself.

 It would be much faster if I cut across my home. Without I secong thought, I burst through the Doggie Door. The house was strangely empty, with neatly packed boxes scattered in various places. I kept going anyway, until I was roughly grabbed around my collar.

"There you are, Mckinley, come on, we gotta go"

 How could I be so stupid. I have known that we were moving for ages, but I have been so busy with Snowstorm, I wasn't aware of what has been going on around me. I tugged and tried to get out of his grasp, but he only held on tighter.

 "Come on, whats gotten into you. Bad dog!"

 "No the pups" I howled, but I knew that he couldn't undrstand. I struggled harder, but I was only chocking myself.

 I was dragged into an automobile. My nails scrapped agianst the metal, but it did no goo. I howled and barked for all that I was worth, but it did no good. I heard the familar rumble of the machine and we began to leave the town. I saw the forset move further and firther away form my view. Snowstorm I thought, I'm sorry, I lost the pups I thought sadly. They were all that I had left from her. I lost my mate, I lost my pups, I lost everything. The weather echoed my thoughts as snow slowly began to drift. I felt hopeless.

Sound the bugle now - play it just for me

As the seasons change - remember how Iused ot be

Now I can't go on - I can't even start

I've got nothing left - just an empty heart

I'm a soilder - wounded so I must give up the fight

There's nothing more  for me - lead me away..

Or leave me lying here

We stropped to rest I sat on top of a hill, not to far away, and let the snow fall around me.

Sound the bugle now - tell them I don't care

There's not a road I know - that leads to anywhere

Without a light I fear that I will - stumble in the dark

Lay right down - decide not to go on

 A fog drifted in and I smelled a sweet famiiar sent.

Then from on high - somewhere in the distance

There's a voice that calls - remmeber who you are

If you loose yourself - your courage soon will follow

So be strong tonight - remmber who you are

 I sat too stunned to speak. She touched my nose with hers and felt my heart flutter

 "McKinley, I'm not angry with you. I'm in SpiritClan now"

"Snowstorm" I whispered, shocked.

"The pups are fine. They all have a mother to take care of them, except for Blizzardpup"

I noticed the white pup that had appeared next to her.

"I love you, take care"

She howled and disappeared with the wind.

Ya you're a soilder now - fighting ina battle

To be free be once more...

Ya that's worth fighting for

I smiled " Good - bye my love"

*       *       *       *       *       *       *       *

"Snowstrom" I yelped

I suddenly woke up. I could still smell the scent of blood. I was still in my den. It was just a dream I tried to tell myself. But it seemd so real. It was faded, but I heard whipereing pups and Snowstrom wailing. I shakily stood up and decided to go to Barksnout's den to ask him about it. As I walked in I saw my father inside talkimg to him. Not wanting to interrupt I sat outside, but I could still hear the conversation.

"SpiritClan have spoken to me" he said sadly "Snowstrom is dead"

I felt ice grip my throat

"But how" I heard my father whisper in a hollow voice

" SpiritClan have not shown me that much"

I remebered our arguement. It seemed stupid now, I despratly wanted to be with her. Her turned to leave but saw me at the enstrance.

"Karti" he said sounding surprised " I didn't -"

"She isn't dead" I said quitly

" Karti I'm sorry, but Barksnout wouldn't lie"

" He's lying." I was starting to raise my voice "Snowstorm isn't dead' I was practically shouting "I'll prove it"

Ignoring my fathers protests I ran out of the camp and ran though the forest, calling her name.

" Snowstorm!" I howled, but I heard no response.

"Snowstorm answer me" I shouted , but in reality I knew she was gone.

I went into a treeless area, our favortie place to hang out together.

" Please" I whispered " Answer me"

I rasied my head and saw the glittering stars overhead. For a second I was angry with SpiritClan. Angry for taking away my sister, but I let out a sigh and desperatly wished more than ever for her to be with ne. A slow fog drifted in and I felt even more alone and scared. I longed for her reassurance. Snow bean to fall and I felt my paws go numb, but I hardly felt it. Nothing no longer mattered anymore. She was gone. She was truly gone. A sweet scent drifted in and I felt someone touch my nose. I snapped my head back up. Standing against the falling snow stood my beloved sister. Her fur glowed like the moon's refelction in a lake. I felt joy fill inside of me. she wasn't dead after all!

"Hi Karti"

" Snowstorm! I knew you weren't dead!" I exclaimed, but she slowly shook her head.

"No, I'm in SpiritClan



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April 19, 2010
do you read the Warriors series? you use a lot of Warriors language :)

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March 27, 2010
Allira03. You outta keep thoughts like that to yourself. If your not gonna say nice things just don't comment. It's okay if you didn't like it, just don't share it with the whole world.

October 11, 2009
Uk Female
Unalaq Pack: Guard/Hunter
I disagree with you Allira03, this story was great quality! I loved it! And I haven't actually read it all yet, but no spelling mistakes so far. I'll do another comment when I've finished reading.

February 02, 2009
Usa Female
Thunder Clan
That was OK,but I couldn't read the mispeled words and the ned didn't really make much since, It was kind of ggood,but not best quality.....:!

December 26, 2008
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
that was sweet and sad

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November 27, 2007
OOO, OOOOO!!!!!! Sad!! Good!! Beautiful!!

August 24, 2007
Mexico Female
oh it made me cry it's a beautiful fic

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March 02, 2007
Very good!

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February 24, 2007
So sad, but great job, love your pics, too. Are you going to
write more?

February 12, 2007
Usa Male
Again, very sad but very sweet. I'm working on an Aniu
story of my own. Want to see it once it's done?

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