Sparkle In Your Eyes - Part II

Author : Juuchan17

Date sent : February 18, 2008

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : Any suggestions? . . . With Valentine's Day approaching, Balto knows he has to get Jenna the perfect gift, . . . but what does one lowly half-breed hero give the most beautiful husky in Nome? As the number of days draws less, Balto will have to rely on those that know his mate best . . . and hope that he can learn something about Jenna that he never knew before. (Part 2/3 - sorry it's a little bit late!)

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Sparkle In Your Eyes - Part II

By Juuchan17

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Lone Wolf_fan writer	February 24, 2008

	Belle's Ice River pack

Wow. You can certainly paint pictures with words. As Dragon Tamer
said, it's nice to be able to sense what Balto's thoughts and emotions
are. Overall, this is a great little story, and I can't wait for the
final part!


Guest	February 24, 2008

Not a bad continuation. I do have a few items of critique, but I'd
rather share them with you by PM - that is, if you're interested.
Overall, I think you're crafting a nice little story.

Keep on chugging, Juuchan!


Redwolf0 3	February 20, 2008

The dialogue got a little corny sometimes, but overall it's a very
sweet story. I can't wait to see what Balto gives Jenna!


Guest	February 26, 2008

Again, today's romance novelists could learn something from reading
this.


Jake Razor	February 19, 2008

Very sweet. I love the way you bring out personal internal conflicts
in Balto's mind, really giving the reader a strong wsense of his
thoughts and emotions. Excellent work.


Icefire	May 09, 2008

	Silvermoon family

i have read them both and i cant wait for part 3

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