Great story keep up the good work please write more soon.

Nice story. Are you going to write about Kavik or Torpedo
sometime?

I think this is my favorite of your stories. And I liked how
Saba was used and how you gave the unknown dog a purpose. I
prefer fanfics that aren't as rushed but if there's a sequel
for this, I'll be reading it!

Loved it!!

I liked this fic. As people have said before, you're really getting better and better. That's why I never can wait to see what you'll write next. Shitiya was one awesome character to me. May I suggest one thing? It was hard for me to keep up with so many characters in the story. You can make a story just as good as this one without using so many characters to tell the story. Keep up the good work! *waits patiently for the next fic*

I agree with catwho has14tails, each time you write, I see imporvement in your stories, in characters, storyline, and developement. I await your next fan fic', Olivia. Keep writing! May the wind be with you.

Olivia, I PROMISE you I'll find time to read it, but not tonight. I have a camp-show-thing and I can't tomorrow either I'm sure it's good, though, all of yours are^^ be patient!

I see improvement everytime you write, keep it up. It was nice of you to give the "Unknown Dog" a name and plotline. But there sure were alot of characters! It was hard for me to keep up with who was who