beside Night who didn’t look down at him.

 

‘How long do we have till it’s going to break?’

 

‘Weeks, days, hours…’ Night said almost in a whisper.

 

‘I need to warn Akela and the others!’ Blaez said as he quickly ran away leaving Night looking up at the huge glacier not noticing how cold the water was that was running pact his paws.

 

 

 

Part 5

‘Akela you have to trust me!’ Blaez argued as Akela, Saffron, Keaton and the other wolves all looked up at him.

 

‘Look Night said it could be weeks there is no point in leaving now, for all we know it could happen in a month from now.’ Akela said back.

 

‘He also said it could happen in days, now I want you and everyone else to come back with me!’ Blaez said looking at all the wolves who started to whisper as Keaton stepped forward.

 

‘Look Akela said no and so we’re staying and there’s nothing you can do about it!’ Keaton sneered at Blaez who frowned as he looked down at him.

 

Stepping forward in front of all the wolves Blaez looked at them before saying. ‘Everyone listen to me this entire valley will be flooded every wolf that’s here will be killed!’

 

‘Does that include the Shnagkai Pack?’ Saffron asking stepping forward towards Blaez who nodded her head at her. ‘That means we no longer need to be here trying to find a weakness.’ Saffron said turning to Akela who frowned at her.

 

‘That’s enough Saffron, Night has already proved to us that he was wrong so he could be wrong again, we are not leaving and that’s final’ Akela said looking at Blaez as Keaton stepped forward and nodded.

 

‘Alright then but I will not come and warn you again’ Blaez said looking at Akela before turning around and walking away as the wolves behind Akela broke in to another whisper.

 

‘Don’t worry everyone Blaez just wants to try and prove himself, don’t let him scare you!’ Keaton said turning to the wolves as Saffron slowly walked up to Akela as they looked at each other sharing evil glares.

 

‘This will on your head, Alpha…’ Saffron sneered as she walked away leaving Akela suddenly looking unsure as she looked after where Blaez had disappeared.

 

 

‘Ronan come back here.’ Dusk said as Ronan started to crawl towards the entrance of the den whilst his sister Sariah slept beside her mother.

 

Torren who had just walked in to the den picked up Ronan who grunted annoyingly as Torren dropped him back beside his sister who suddenly woke up and frowned.

 

‘Any luck my mate?’ Dusk said looking up at Torren who smiled.

 

‘Those pathetic fools are outside our borders, but our wolves also reported that Blaez and some of the others are not with them.’

 

‘Do you think they split up?’ Dusk ask questionably as Torren sneered.

 

‘I hope so without that Blaez they’re nothing, that stupid wolf Akela is to forward, something clouds her mind but that’s the only weakness we need to kill them.’

 

‘When will you attack?’ Dusk as Ronan started playing with his mother tail.

 

‘Tonight.’ With that Torren quickly ascended above the den to gather some of his strongest warriors whilst Dusk and her pups rested lazily in their den.

 

 

That night Blaez looked up at the night sky not being able to sleep his head was filled with to many thoughts. He thought killing ever Shangkai wolf would be a blessing for everyone but if he left innocent pups to die as well as Akela and the others would it still be worth it?

 

‘Can’t sleep my friend?’ Night said looking down at Blaez who sat slowly sat up.

 

‘I must have blood from the Night Pack in me’ Blaez joked.

 

‘The wolves of my old pack used to watch the stars during the night and we hoped that Sirius the dog star would always keep us safe, but all that was just false and it’s only now I realize that.’

 

‘I have made up my mind of what I’m going to do Night’ Blaez said standing up and looking out into the distance. ‘I’m going to warn the Shangkai pack.’

 

‘You can’t do that!’ Night suddenly snarled surprising Blaez who turned to look at him.

 

‘I’m not going to let any young pups die that have no quarrel with me or what I’m doing here’

 

‘Those pups will grow in to killers, and sometimes I wonder what you’re really are doing here’ Night snarled as he walked forwards towards Blaez and whispered in his ear. ‘If you help them I promise I will kill you’

 

Frowning Blaez watched as Night walked away, there was something Night wasn’t telling him and he was going to find out and as for the Shangkai pack Blaez knew that it could used to his advantage, if Torren promised to leave the land Blaez would tell him about the danger so he could escape, but if Torren didn’t agree then he was going to face an ultimate doom.

 

Hearing a rustle in small ferns nearby Blaez quickly turned around and growled thinking it was a Shangkai wolf but who he saw was Saffron looking at him.

 

‘Saffron what are you…’ He was cut off because Saffron interrupted.

 

‘Blaez Torren attacked us he’s kidnapped some of us…’

 

Blaez gasped as he walked forwards towards Saffron. ‘Where’s Akela?’

 

‘I don’t know I couldn’t see…’

 

Running forward towards the area where he knew the others were sleeping Blaez quickly turned to Saffron before saying ‘Go find Night and tell him to meet me in the cave right away!’ With that Blaez ran in to the darkness as Saffron ran to find Night, it looked as though any deal Blaez was thinking of having with the Shangkai wolves was all but gone.

 

 

 

Part 6

‘What are we going to do?’ Azure asked as all the wolves gathered together looking at Blaez who was in deep thought as he paced from side to side.

 

‘We have to go rescue them.’ Konnor said nodding and standing up.

 

‘I agree with Konnor we have to attack now.’ Saffron jumped up nodding her head.

 

‘That’s what he’ll be wanting us to do’ Blaez sighed turning back around as he stopped pacing and sat back down trying to think of what to do. ‘Now listen to me I want some of you to patrol the border of the Shangkai pack lands and when the wolves are released you can lead them to higher ground…’

 

‘Wait a minute…’ Konnor said walking forward ‘How do you know that Torren will just let them leave? I haven’t known the wolf for long but trust me he won’t let the biggest threats he has just leave like that!’

 

Blaez sighed as he looked at the wolves. ‘I have something to confess, many weeks ago I found a huge glacier of ice on top of the mountain and I believe that soon it will break sending a vast amount of fresh water flooding the entire land killing every wolf stuck there.’

 

Everyone gasped as they looked up at Blaez.

 

‘Why didn’t you tell us?’ Konnor said looking disappointed.

 

‘I thought I’d protect you, I thought that the water would do the work for us but now that they have captured the others we have no choice but to rescue them’ Blaez said looking back at his friend but before any of them could say anything the ground seemed to shake for a moment.

 

‘What was that?’ Azure said looking unsure as they all turned to the small river that flowed down the mountain and to their horror it was starting to rise at a quickening rate.

 

‘Please listen to me, I know I let you down I know I was wrong but if we don’t work together now Akela and the others will die.’

 

The wolves seemed to consider the options for a moment before Azure and Konnor finally stepped forward beside Blaez.

 

‘You’ll always be my friend Blaez but that doesn’t mean I can’t hate you for a little while.’ Konnor joked and laughed as Blaez looked a little unsure as though not sure if he was really joking or not. The other wolves all looked at each other before walking forward towards Blaez who sighed in relief as they did.

 

‘Now listen to me this is what’s going to happen…’ As Blaez talked all the wolves nodded and agreed and after awhile they all quickly ran to their positions except for Sage who stopped and walked up to Blaez.

 

‘Why do I have to stay here I can help really I can,’ Sage said in a low voice as Blaez looked down at his son, he didn’t want his son to be hurt so he had made him keep watch of the river to howl when it finally broke.

 

‘I need someone to stay here it’s an important job so…Sage’ Blaez quickly corrected himself as Sage looked questionably up at him before nodding. ‘Good luck’ Blaez said as he quickly jumped around and ran down towards the Shangkai pack land his plan was in motion.

 

 

Slowly Blaez crept through the forest which was slowly starting to come back to life after the harsh winter they had just had. It wasn’t long before a scout found Blaez wondering through the forest.

 

‘Torren will be very pleased with me for finding Blaez the wolf.’ The wolf sneered.

 

‘I’m sure…will you take me to him?’ Blaez asked sounding sarcastic as the other wolf laughed.

 

‘Yes and he’ll deal with you right now.’

 

‘Good…’ Blaez said under his breath as he obediently followed the Shangkai wolf through the forest towards Torren’s den.

 

Once he arrived he instantly saw Akela and the others under guard by a few large wolves who snarled at Blaez as he walked past but Blaez ignored them as he smiled at Akela who just looked very confused.

 

Torren walked out from his and once he saw Blaez he smiled and walked forward towards him, he was at least a head higher then Blaez but Blaez just looked up at him with an unconcerned look on his face.

 

‘Oh dear look who we have here…’ Torren smiled as he looked at the scout who had brought Blaez and motioned him to go away. ‘Come here to save your pathetic friends eh?’

 

‘You will let them go.’ Blaez said in a calm voice as Torren laughed to himself.

 

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April 27, 2007
Global Moderator Usa Female
I love this one! Blaez did everything right. At least Torren
had enough sense to get his pack to safety and not risk
loosing his family. At least he was good enough to do that.
This book was amazing! I can't wait for Book 4!

April 24, 2007
Usa Male
I LOVE THIS ONE! Blaez displayed all the virtues a good guy
should. There were several spelling errors, but your writing
is PHENOMENAL! MORE SOON, PLEASE!

P.S. Your
English teacher is absolutely right, and I should know since
I'm writing a book.




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