in Balto’s fur and sobbed.
Sad Ending… *sniff*
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| July 17, 2006 | ||
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I LOVE it! You did a very good job grabbing the reader, especially for
a short a story (sometimes there's little suspense in them) but not
here! Your picture of Dingo's beginning was grand! I'd really like to
see more stuff from you in the future! My only advice is this... write
more to your Dingo Story, make that chapter one and continue on, maybe
make Dingo take revenge, or, you could do something not so common and
have him find it in his heart to forgive Rex... there's thousands of
ideas out there, and you really should write more! It'd almost be a
crime to not finsh it. - RTW |
![]() | July 15, 2006 | |
Nice fic! It made a tear I loved your character Trick for some
reason. Rex was good too. |