Very well-written and I ADORE the idea behind it. I love how
you made the setting a city ;D It kind of shows how its good
and bad in its own way. And this story is very true (for the
MOST part anyway )

Thanks, Cat! I made it a city because the whole place
reminded me of a city, so I took that to mind when I
fstarted writing. This was one of my
"sit-down-and-write-something-quick" fics, because well,
like the main character, I was confused at what was going
on. (Well, I'm working on a separate story for the character
used in the story, which will explain her power. Hopefully.
^__^) And I was trying to make it sort of a satire, but also
quite a "true" story . . . and tie in Balto to it. I think
it worked! Thanks again for reading! I really appreciate it!

I can see who you are refering to in this one. The only
thing is, is that you made it sound as if Balto was an
idol. (like a real one) Not so with me. I am but a fan who
likes to draw and write. Still, nicely done! I hope others
read this and see that all the fighting is stupid in 'the
city'.

Yep...sadly, that's how BS is these days.

Kelev: The only reason why I wrote it in that sense was
because that's how "I" saw it (since the whole fic was in my
POV . . . well, from my character's POV, I should say, but
she and I are the same). I know that there are some fans
that are just like you (since I am like that myself . . .
although sometimes I focus tediously on other parts of the
series *cough*WQ*cough*), but I felt that the majority of
fans are the "idolizing obsessors" that I mainly focused on.
I hope that didn't offend you, Kelev! Thanks for commenting
and enjoying the fic! I do agree that people should think
while they read this . . . and think carefully! ^__~

Katie_GSD: I'm glad you like my fics! Please
continue to read and enjoy them!

Olivia_loves_Link: And that's why I was inspired to write
about it. *nods* Sad, but it's the hard truth of the matter
unfortunately. Hopefully there are better days to come!
*crosses fingers*

I love the metaphors and that reference to Cat.

Beautiful story.

Very good Juuchan!! ^^

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Hopefully a sequel will be
unnecessary . . . but I am working on a story that tells of
how that character came to be (Reborn Again - the prologue
and first chapter are up right now, so check it out if you
can!)!