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| January 27, 2009 | ||
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It seemed to have a lot of gaps, which made it hard to understand the
plot while I was reading it. But apart from that, it was fairly
good. I also don't understand why it was rated PG. This story was low on violence, had nothing else I could see which would earn a PG rating, and had more than enough positive content to justify making it available to younger readers. |