won’t” he kissed her and left.

As he ran through the forest he met Apricot who was playing she looked at him and said “Hi Baltofriend” he replied “Hi” he looked at her and said “go protect Raina” she looked at him and said “yes sire” she left. Baltofriend continue throught the forest and started to come across dead trees and plants he said to himself “He is close” he soon found the creature inside a cave Baltofriend approached the cave quietly he nocked a arrow and said “go back to the pit of darkness you came from” he released the arrow and it hit the creature, the creature let out a shriek of pain and crawled it’s way out of the cave Baltofriend was finally able to see what it really looked like, the creatures flesh was black as night it had blood red eyes and it had monterous arms thick as a tree trunk it looked at him with it’s blood red eyes Baltofriend said “I am here to cast you into the shadows so you feed on no more souls” the creature squealed and it rushed towards him Baltofriend nocked three arrows and released them into the creature, the creature stumbled for a moment but kept on charging at him Baltofriend dropped his bow and drew his sword and charged at the creature he plunged his sword into the creature the creature’s blood oozed over his sword blade Baltofriend wrenched his sword from the creatures flesh and the black blood of the creature spilled to the ground the grass started to immediately die. Baltofriend back way form the creature who was wreathing on the ground in pain the creature got off the ground it’s blood pouring to the ground as it made it’s way towards him Baltofriend charged at it the creature grabbed him and threw him into the cave the creature grabbed a sharp log and rushed at Baltofriend with it. Baltofriend was stabbed through the heart with it he coughed up blood it felt like someone had knocked all the wind out of his lungs he screamed in pain he tried pulling the log out of his chest but it had gone through his body and into the cave wall, the creature looked at him and said “you pathetic creature you think you could kill me now I will do what I did to the other wolves” the creature drew in air and it made a sucking sound Baltofriend could feel the life draining from his body, all of a sudden Raina swooped in and clawed the creature across it’s face Raina landed on the ground and said “get away from him” she growled the creature stumbled back in pain then rushed at her Raina flew up into the air and then plunged her claws into the creatures flesh she riped off it’s head a large pool of black blood spilled to the ground. Baltofriend watched Raina stand there then he felt his heart stop everything went black all of a sudden there was a bright light that shined it blinded him he felt a warmth of comfort a voice said “come” Baltofriend looked back and could see his limp body pined to the cave wall bleeding he turned back to the light and walked into it. The world was now nothing light blue with colors swirling through it he then came to a silver gate which he was met by a pure snow white wolf it spoke to him in a distance voice “it isn’t your time yet” he replied “but it must be I died” the white wolf replied “yes but take a look” the wolf directed to a thing that look like a bird bath Baltofriend looked into it and could see Raina who was laying his body on the ground she said “don’t go” he looked at her then at the white wolf he said “how do I go back” the wolf replied “you already know the way” it touched his chest all of a sudden Baltofriend was jerked backwards and fell back to earth, he landed in his body he drew in air into his lungs it pained him to breath. Raina looked at him with surprise she said “Baltofriend” he nodded she watched as his wounds healed she hugged him he said "“ooow Raina” she said “sorry” she helped him to his feet they walked back to their cave.

They found Apricot crying over Roses body Raina set Baltofriend on the ground and walked over to Apricot, Baltofriend looked at them then noticed a transparent figure appear he said to Raina and Apricot “move guys” they looked at him confused and Raina replied “for whom” he replied “for Rose” Raina saw a transparent Rose approach her rigid body all of a sudden there was a flash of light and Rose sat up and stretched she said “good to be back” she looked at Baltofriend and said “thank you” Apricot hugged Rose and they both walked out of the cave. Days after the creature was slain Raina and Baltofriend and his brother were walking through the woods all of a sudden a warm breeze blew threw Baltofriend the breeze said “thank you” he replied back “you’re welcome” Raina turned around and said “what did you say” he replied “I said nothing” he grinned she look at him and smiled they all continued to walk on.

The view pulls back out of the trees and we see a lush green forest stretching for miles and the sun is setting.

The End

Thank You to QueenRaina Werewolf, Apricot Werewolf, Animalover for letting me use there characters

And a special thanks to my brother CrimsonWolf Vampire for letting use his character. Baltofriend is my character don’t use him or any others mentioned in this story I had special permission from all these people to use theres.



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frostthespiritwolf08
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March 28, 2011
omg its awesome when i had just started reading it i heard a weird echoey ringing in my ears i thought the creature was coming for me but it was just me imagining crazy mysterious dramatic music

Guest
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November 03, 2010
Reminds me of my everyday life of slaying mythical beasts. Those werewolves are cool though. We're buds we hang out now and then. Great fanfic! :icon299:

May 17, 2010
Usa Male
good fan fic!

July 28, 2006
Usa
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Real nice thriller!! Don't give up, KBF!! You've got tons of potential. Keep writing, you're doing a great job!!

July 12, 2006
Usa Male
I am glad everyone liked it

July 10, 2006
Usa
WOW!!! I loved it, Baltofriend! Thank you for putting in the copywrites for my char, and thank you for repecting her and not killing her or anything.(I know you wouldn't, anyway ;) ) You got Apricot's personality perfectly! Great FanFic.:P




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