Souleater
By Baltofriend Werewolf
Opening: A young black wolf is running through the forest all of a sudden she stops in the middle of a clearing.
Her ears perk for any sound her breath comes out in a mist of steam, she scans the trees around the clearing for any sign of movement she sees a dark shape rush through the trees in front of her she turned and began running again she could hear something coming after her and it was gaining on her. She kept running until it caught her.
All of a sudden there is a sucking sound, the forest became eerily quiet.
Miles away in a valley cover in a lush green forest Baltofriend was awoken by a dream he had. He got up and stretched, he thought to himself “that was a rather disturbing dream” he shrug then turned to look at the white female werewolf with wings named Raina. He watched as she slept on he turned from her and walked out of the cave. He looked out over the valley and felt a squeezing sensation on his heart he put his paw to his chest and rubbed it the sensation went away. His ears perked as he heard Raina stir behind him he turned to her she looked at him with her blue eyes she said “good morning” he nodded and said “I will go hunt to get some food” she nodded and went back to sleep.
Baltofriend walked around in the forest all of sudden he saw a deer he crept close to it, the deer looked at him and ran he chased after it and lost in a clearing all of a sudden a evil laugh echoed through the forest. Baltofriends chest burst in pain he went down on his knees clutching his chest he screamed at the same time Raina woke up again she too started to scream because Baltofriend and her shared a soul Baltofriends had been shattered when he was turned into a werewolf. As Baltofriend kneeled there a voice said in his head “you’re next doggy” he said back to the voice “you cannot have me” he got up and started to run, he ran deep into the forest where he had never been the lush forests he was always use to were gone in this forest the ground was covered in snow and there was nothing to be heard not even the cawing of a crow.
He noticed underneath a tree there was a mound of snow he walked over to it and started digging he jumped back in horror to what he found a young black wolf was lying there with a look of absolute horror on her face, her mouth was open as though she had been screaming her body was rigid her limbs sticking out of the snow like black sticks the thing that disturbed him the most were her eyes they were icy blue and dilated they had a far off stare in them. He checked her body and couldn’t see any bullet holes or anything that might cause death it looked like she had something horrible done to her but he couldn’t figure out what.
He turned and walked away from her, he walked back into his own territory which he recognized immediately he found Raina frantically looking for him she heard him coming she turned to him and pounced on him. He fell over and said “hey what was that for” she replied “why didn’t you come back after hunting” he diverted his eyes from hers and said “sorry I didn’t come back” she let him up he looked at her and said “when I was in the forest my chest exploded in pain and a voice said to me that it wants me for some reason, I ran into part of the forest where is was silent as the grave I found a wolf there who had died but she wasn’t shot or anything she was just dead it was strange” she looked at him she replied “ I also felt a pain in my chest” he looked at her with fear in his eyes and said “what is going on around here” she said “ I dunno” they both turned and walked back to their cave.
Later that day Raina and Baltofriend were talking all of a sudden Rose a werewolf stray came running into the cave Raina looked at her Rose ignored her and said “something bad is happening” Raina and Baltofriend looked at each other then at Rose and Baltofriend said “whats happening” Raina nodded still looking at Rose. Baltofriend got up as did Raina she said “take us to where the problem is” Rose nodded she lead them to a place where there was five dead wolves lying in the middle of a clearing Baltofriend looked at them and saw that they looked the same way when he found the other wolf they all had blank stares, mouths wide open as if they had been screaming. Raina looked at him and said “is this the way you found the other wolf” he nodded and said “yes” Raina walked up to the nearest wolf and looked at it she turned and said “it looks like they had something remove from them because they haven’t been dead long they are still warm” he looked at her the thing that disturb him the most was that she said it looked like they had something removed from them.
All of a sudden he had a vision it was like watching a movie but it was real, he watched as the five wolves stood in a circle all of a sudden a dark shape appeared then one of the wolves began to rise into the air it started to thrash around in the air, it eyes started to glow white Baltofriend watched as a transparent wolf began to come out of it’s eyes he thought “this thing steals their souls no wonder why I couldn’t find anything wrong with them” he continued to watch as the wolfs soul came out of it’s eyes the wolfs body became rigid and it’s eyes turn icy blue the wolf fell to the ground with a sickening thud. He watched as the wolfs soul be consumed by the dark shape. Then the vision ended he looked over at Raina who was talking with Rose she noticed his gaze and saw that something was wrong she said “are you ok” he replied “I know what happened to these wolves” she looked at him with a puzzled look on her face and said “how” he replied “I had a vision it showed me that the wolves had their souls riped from their bodies and a dark shape consumed them” she stood there with a look of horror and replied “that is rather disturbing” he nodded, they buried the wolves in the clearing and left.
Baltofriend sat on top of their cave and stared out over the valley Raina approached him she looked at him and said to herself “ I hope those visions go away” he noticed that he was being watched he turned and saw her, he said oh hi” he turned from her and continued to stare out over the valley she walked up to him and sat down besides him he looked over to her she said “why do you think these visions and things are happening to you” he shrugged and replied “I dunno” he then said “whatever is out there it clearly wants my soul which is bad if that thing gets it and consumes it you will die” she watched as a flicker of worry appear in his eyes she said “don’t worry that thing won’t get it I trust you” she watched as he pulled out his soul he replied “I will not let it get this” he put his soul back and looked at Raina and said “I promise.”
The next day Baltofriend met with his brother Crimsonwolf Vampire his brother looked at him with his icy blue eyes and said “are you all right” Baltofriend replied “yeah I’m fine” his brother looked at him for a few seconds and said “all right lets go” Baltofriend and Crimson went hunting for a hour until they heard a scream echo through the woods, they rushed to where it came from they found Rose the werewolf stray trying to fight off the dark shape Baltofriend had seen. Crimson pulled out a sword and said “get away from her you monster” he pounced on the dark shape stabbing it in the head, the dark shape let out a shriek that could be heard from miles away the dark shape started to shake to try to get Crimson off of itself, Crimson jumped off of it removing his sword as he jumped off from the wound poured a black stinking liquid that fell to the ground like rain when the liquid hit the ground the grass started to die. Baltofriend watched as Rose cringed below a tree shaking like mad and he looked from to his brother who had his back to him, his brother was breathing heavily his sword at the ready the creature walked towards Rose Crimson stabbed it repeatedly the creature swept him out of the way Crimson flew into a tree and was knocked out, Baltofriend ran at the creature and was to swept out of the way he hit a tree and saw a red curtain of blood cover his eyes then everything went black.
Baltofriend awoke some time later he looked at his brother who was laying in a puddle of his own blood he got up and walked over to a rigid body laying on the ground he saw that it was Rose. He looked into her eyes and saw they were icy blue and had a far off stare in them her limbs were out stretched like she had been trying to push the creature away he thought “damn it I could have done something if I hadn’t passed out” he grabbed her lifeless body and his knocked out brother he stretched his white feathery wings and flapped them he flew over the lush green forest to his cave where Raina was sitting waiting for their return. Baltofriend landed in the cave Raina looked at him and saw that he was covered in blood with two limp forms in his arms she stood up and walked over to him and said “what happened” he replied “Rose was attacked and we went to help her and it resulted like this” Raina took Roses body from him and laid it genitally on the floor Baltofriend put his brother on the floor and washed the blood from his fur after he was done he turned and looked at Raina who was looking at Rose he walked over to her she turned and fell into his arms and she said “what are we to do” he replied “I dunno” she looked up into his eyes and could see herself reflecting in his blue eyes he looked into hers and said “whatever it takes I will kill this thing and maybe set the souls of all the animals free” she nodded and let go of him she watched as he sharpen his sword and string his bow, after he was done he looked at Raina and said “I must go” she nodded and walked up to him and kiss him he was taken aback by this and said “I…. uh….” He looked at her confused she looked at him and said “don’t die on me or anything all right” she blushed he replied “I won’t” he kissed her
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![]() spiritwo lf08 | March 28, 2011 | |
omg its awesome when i had just started reading it i heard a weird
echoey ringing in my ears i thought the creature was coming for me but
it was just me imagining crazy mysterious dramatic music |
![]() | November 03, 2010 | |
Reminds me of my everyday life of slaying mythical beasts. Those
werewolves are cool though. We're buds we hang out now and then. Great
fanfic! |
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| Shout Box Moderator |
Real nice thriller!! Don't give up, KBF!! You've got tons of
potential. Keep writing, you're doing a great job!! |