I'm shocked. I can't say anything else but... I'm shocked. I'm
sure you have a very good reason for doing this, so I won't bend your
ear raving about it, but that was as if a cold arctic blast had shook
me to my very core. Please continue with your story soon so that we
can see what happens in the end. Thank you.

Kiona! NOOOO!!! When I read the last few lines, I literally
started to cry! Catwhohas14tails and Draco, there had better be an
awesome ending to this! Still, it's an unexpected twist, which I must
admit is rather a jaw-dropper.

WP--> The story's not over yet ;D

Aww poor Kiona... if she's gone, I wonder if Achak will approve of
Hokee. UK--> That's why it's best not to read the comments before the
story

Oh, that was sad; Kiona died. She died a hero though.

Why did you have to kill Kiona!!! She was my fav character Still a
great fanfic and probably the best series

Why? WHY? She was your best character, my fav on Balto
Source! And now she's GONE? I is sad...

Man I was really sad when I read the line about Kiona dying. Cat I
hope you have something good planned I can't wait to see what coming
next.

no, misunderstood me.

when I meant low, I didn't refer it
to as a negaitve sort of way. I meant that it just really surprising
cus I never thought that Kiona would get killed off. Never. But it
does make it an interesting variable that i'm looking forward to.
But I dont' know why I feel that its unlikely that she is truly
dead...

Catluvs--> There's nothing 'low' about it, I don't see how you
interpret it as such. And believe what you want, nothing's going to
change Lol.

oh...wow. I never thought you would stoop as low as to killing of your
prime chacrter. But funnily enough, I don't fully believe that Kioan
is gone for good...*shrugs*

Noez! *dies* Your series is so great, but the newest one is so sad. :[

awesome series! The last one was heart breaking
lookin
forward to the next part of the brown hill spirits!

Dolphins Friend --> Yeah, too bad you had to blab the ending to
everyone on the shout box XD Rozalyn --> Thank you. We're glad you're
staying tuned 8D Some people won't read the fic anymore because of a
certain someone not being in it anymore. halfblood --> Thank you 8D
*smiley sam* --> Stay tuned, it gets better ;D

Well it was really sad but people sorta ruined the surprise saying
what happens all over the place XD

no...how could you??!!! KIONA!!!! oh yea don't read the comments if u dont want it to be spoiled

No offense but do you all have to spoil the surprise? Anyway great
fanfic, as usual!

that really caught me off guard. i know that there are these
unexpected and striking deaths in Draco and Cat's fics, but I never
thought it would happen to Kiona. I'm still trembling right now.
Really good one, like all others, though this death really
disappointed many of us. We'll miss you, Kiona.

Kiona's DEAD?? Not to be offensive, but I seriously can't believe you
did that. Still a very well-written fan fiction.

oh that is so sad why did kiona have to die

Really good yet sad

Nooo! May the spirit of Kiona live on...

CatLuvs --> Well, okay then You'll see what happens, I guess. UK
--> Yeah, we're pretty pissed about that, but we hope you still
enjoyed the fic so far XD

Why did you kill off Kiona?

Why did you have to kill Kiona? I loved her!

Thank you everyone

Aww, that was sad I wasn't even expecting that. It was very well
written though.

It is sad D= but thanks! Glad you all like it ^^ And it's not over
yet, so don't stop coming Lol. It continues!

Wow, despite the death of Kiona, this is one of the best out of the
series. Very emotional and powerful. Poor Achak, I felt bad for him
near the end of the story D:

Wow . . . that was unexpected . . . *weeps* (although I felt a bit
spoiled with the comments . . .)

I will have to agree -
one of the best series on the site, and that part proves it. You guys
are really good at showing how each character affects others. I can't
believe that the series is still going to continue, but I am expecting
something good for the rest of this series!

- Juuchan17