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| June 13, 2006 | ||
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| A Lone Wolf |
Well, that was good, a little short but still, good, I tihnk you
tactic of leaving it where the reader wants to know what will happen
is powerfully great, I can't wait ot see what happens next. |
| June 12, 2006 | ||
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| MSDF/SES Paranormal Creator |
aww short... You should add more stuff when make fanfic. Posting it
like chapter by chapter is forbiden. So large part by part and it'll
do it fine. Unlike in forum you can post chapter by chapter but not in
the fanfic site where reads 'only finished fanfics'. However this one
was cool and told funny things of being held by hostage in wolf pack
where usual is that sort of laws...but some parts were total fictional
like Alpha hanging around in borders...usual Scout's are doing it =D |