Poor Juli.................. I thought at first that Steele wanted to rape her.

This is definitly the best story I've read here yet! I'm glad you let Aleu come back to life!

Nice writing but oh my god I never thought a story could maake you feel fear! Agh exspecially the parts were steal slowly did everything. Nice writing and great story!

Dingo was awesome why did he have to die!

I used to think books or writing could not make you scared,
or not make you feel a bit disturbed but after reading
Darkness I don't think I will ever be the same again. It was
very well written. It beats some of even the best stories on
Balto Source. I loved this story!!

Everything in this was a surprise. It was violent and sad
yes, but very well written. Once I started reading it it was
extremely hard to stop.I loved it. To be honest these types
of books are some of my favorite. You're an excellent
writer. Keep it up!

your sotries are so sad I love them

OMG. This is THE best Balto story I have ever read . I printed it out and read it last night. I wolden't read it at night though as I found out. Not that it gives you nightmares, but that you can't go to sleep. Evry time I put it down and turned out the lights... I colden't stop! You shuld get this publesed. The BEST Balto story I ever read

wow . . . you never cease to amaze me! this one was awesome! i couldnt stop reading! i was afraid id get nightmares about . . . well i dont want to give it away to people who havent read it . . . but some of the disturbing parts of it (thankfully i didnt). . . anyway it was a great story and you are an amazing author. keep on writing!

i just what to say that this story was so cool. it was both funny and sad. hope you make more storys like this.