was fresh, filled with iris flowers. Angelfire had the most happiest look on her face. She then turned around to see a pack of wolfs, she quickly ran away, going into the cave. The wolfs followed her, not seeing her around. A bronze wolf stepped out. "You new?" The wolf asked, he identified himself as Tae, Alpha of a pack that roamed the forest randomly. Angelfire nodded, she'd been accepted into her new home.
The pack left, leaving Angelfire to lay in a cave. She looked upon the Sun setting. "The view was wonderful in the mountains..." Angelfire mumbled to herself then began to play with a leaf. As the leaf kept bouncing off Angelfire's paws, she thought about her family. "I hope dad killed those bears... mom probably took off with Lillian, Keanan & Jakob. Miaska is dead. It has to be! They're scared of this forest.. I guess I must stay here." Angelfire thought, playing with the leaf still she sighed happily... but too soon. In time, she'd find out the real truth about what happened, & about Miaska. ...Much more than Miaska...
Some reviews of this story...
Iaka successfully killed the two bears, but ventured of somewhere else to hope, find Miaska & pay back. Since he found the body of his mate; Jayla. Unfortunately, Miaska found Lillian & Jakob, along with their five pups, & Orca. Miaska killed Jakob & Lillian, the new borns were almost 5 months. Miaska got control of Orca, Keanan, Ateh, & Ari. To be her rogue wolves. They soon forgot about their dreadful past... & became feared wolfs of the mountains along with Miaska. Airis & Iris both escaped, but they lost each other. The Roleplayers in the Roleplay box obviously found out the fate of Angelfire in this forest, fate of Miaska, Orca was unknown, Airis, Ateh & Iris are fine, normal wolfs living amongst themselves. Angelfire is currently wanting to escape, she has memorys now beyond belief. Now... I must go. *Darth Vadar.* I will be back.
Angelfire(C)Araya (I sometimes use Angelfire as a username on the shout boxes when I'm signed off, I've been using this name for a year or two.)
Jayla(C)Araya
Iaka(C)Araya
Lillian(or lily) (C)Araya
Ateh & Ari (C)Araya
Iris(C)Araya
Airis(C)Araya
Miaska(C)Araya
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| May 12, 2006 | ||
Well, it certainly helps to know what happened with all your
characters. ^^ I would suggest in your writing to be less jumpy on
your transition from character to character and a little more smooth?
Eh, what does HP know? =P |
![]() Wolf | May 08, 2006 | |
Confusing, but very well writen. You have talant,Araya,I can't wait
for You'r next story. ![]() |