Hard Past

Author : Araya

Date sent : May 07, 2006

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Flashback/Character Developement

Description : This tells of some characters Ive made, their hard pasts' that theyve delt with. Its a short story, but worth reading, enjoy.. hopefully. :D

Length : Short -

Characters : 439 visits



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Hard Past
By Araya

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May 12, 2006
Well, it certainly helps to know what happened with all your characters. ^^ I would suggest in your writing to be less jumpy on your transition from character to character and a little more smooth? Eh, what does HP know? =P

Carolina Wolf
Carolina
Wolf
May 08, 2006
Confusing, but very well writen. You have talant,Araya,I can't wait for You'r next story.;)

May 08, 2006
Sorry for the confusion, some of my story was cut off. =( the review will probably inform you... sorry for the mistake...


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