Description : Another Balto/World War II crossover.
In the summer of 1943, Balto signs up for an elite Army unit called the Paratroops, and finds him self in the 101st Airborne Division, 'The Screaming Eagles.' As they ship off to war, he keeps in close touch with his friend Jenna, and the two begin to feel something more than friendship toward each other, but is it enough to see them through the tides of war? This fan fiction is rated PG-13 for war violence, some blood, and occasional cursing.
I just have one thing I can say about this, and that is....
BRAVO! *Claps*
THAT WAS AMAZING!
I got to read it on Sunday, and I loved it! You did a very nice job.
Something strange by the way...
I just started (like two weeks ago) my own story about WWII and there
are some similarities between yours and mine (except mine's not about
Balto) In mine though instead of being with the airborne, the main
character is on Omaha beach, landing on Normandy. Hell itself if you
ask me...
Anyway, I loved the story, make more, if you make a sequel that would
be GREAT! You are an awesome writer and I think you should look into
getting your stuff published!
And you say I'm good on toying with people's emotoins. This made my
cry and is one of your best! I love the sence when Balto comes back in
the resturant and they pour their emotions out in one kiss. It's a
perfect story, my friend. Write on.
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BRAVO! *Claps*
THAT WAS AMAZING!
I got to read it on Sunday, and I loved it! You did a very nice job. Something strange by the way...
I just started (like two weeks ago) my own story about WWII and there are some similarities between yours and mine (except mine's not about Balto) In mine though instead of being with the airborne, the main character is on Omaha beach, landing on Normandy. Hell itself if you ask me...
Anyway, I loved the story, make more, if you make a sequel that would be GREAT! You are an awesome writer and I think you should look into getting your stuff published!
- Rotramel the Writer
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