if she’d been shot, and stepped back as well.

More tears came as she turned and dashed down the street.

Balto sighed.

He hadn’t wanted to hurt her, but…

He turned and walked back up the steps, reaching the top just as Jenna stepped out.

She looked mad, in fact, had Balto not known her the way he did… well it looked like she would kill him.

“Where is she?” Jenna snapped.

“I don’t know,” Balto said, “and I don’t care.”

Jenna still looked a little angry.

Balto nuzzled her, and she didn’t step back.

Gradually, her anger melted.

“What was that?” she asked quietly. “you were going to go with her, weren’t you?”

He sighed and nodded.

Jenna turned away.

“Jen,” Balto said, ”I was going to, but then… but then I thought of you, and how much I love you.”

She turned back around.

Balto’s smile faded, and he became the most serious Jenna could ever recall seeing him.

“You’re the only one for me Jen.”

She smiled.

“Oh Balto…”

She looked at the ground.

He walked over to her and nuzzled her, raising her muzzle with his paw so he was looking her right in the eyes.

“I love you Jen.”

She smiled.

“I love you too Balto.”

He smiled.

“You want to go for a walk?”

“Sure,” Jenna said.

 

 

THE END



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Guest
Guest
January 11, 2011
wow! your are an amazing writer!!!

November 08, 2009
Australia Male
Member of Aurora Borealis Pack
poor Duke

November 08, 2009
Australia Male
Member of Aurora Borealis Pack
Balto cheating on Jenna that's something I gotta see lol

Guest
Guest
September 10, 2007
I love this fan fic. There's a story called "Balto:Betrayl"
and it is very similar to this fan fic! You might want to
read Balto:Betrayel.

Skyla
Skyla
May 28, 2005
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! UR SOOOOO GOOD!!!!! U ROK!!!!!

LoneWolf
LoneWolf
May 30, 2005
Read this one at least THREE TIMES!!! Great job! Keep up the good work!
Aaaaaaaaaaaaannndd... I really, really enjoy the theme of love that I found in your stories. Jenna and Balto, Kodi and Dusty, Dash and Shasta... SO MANY PERFECT COUPLES!!

Balto30
Balto30
June 03, 2005
Wow!!!very great!!!But i dont like that Duke dies.Oh well it was GREAT!!!!1:P

Blue_Wolf
Blue_Wol
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June 05, 2005
This was a really awesome, I liked the way you write the conversations they seem so real. well anyways your a great writer, and I plan to read all your fanfics once I get the time. keep up the great work!

Alex
Alex
February 10, 2006
It was sad when That German shepard was killed and is this a sequel to a broken trust?:)

Balto678
Balto678
February 27, 2006
This fic is what inspired me to write 'Kodi's Big Mistake'. It's very well written and great idea!

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