Then he slipped into two vines and ran, with Suzy, through the storm.

 

 

Bounchai let out a cry of pain. He had been struck by lightening. It hit his bone and tore it. It was almost split in half. Bounchai coughed and collapsed onto the ground. He felt as if his entire body was going to split and he would never see the light of day again. And he was right. He lay on the ground; broken bones throughout his body. He saw a light as he closed his eyes and exhaled his very last breath...

Shamus ran through the obstacles in his path as if they weren't even there. The storm became feircer and the lightening was the last thing he appered to see; Shamus and Suzy were knocked out cold, not able to get up. 

~Chapter 5~

 

The morning sun beamed down upon the pack. Daisy and Mirah were asleep with Clara, Ali and Elias. Bounchai:dead. Akara:dead. Mylan:dead. The pack decided to move on, and those who survived never saw survivors who were seperated ever again.

Shamus, laying in a dead position, at last, moved his neck and opened his eyes. Suzy was already awake, but collapsed on the ground. "Is-is this heaven?" She asked wearily.

"I dunno." Said Shamus in a still-weak tone.

"The storm looks over. Where are we?"

Shamus did not reply. He and his sister were collapsed on the ground, breathing heavily, and with dead weight, moved themselves around every once and a while.

Finally finding the strength to get up, Shamus and Suzy walked to a nearby stream. After a quick drink, Shamus finally decided, "Suzy, we should go our seperate ways. We'll sloweach other down if we stay together."

"What? Shamus, if we split up we'll die!"

"We can't afford dying together at the same time. If we're gonna die, we won't know about it. Capiashe?"

 

"You're no mum or dad, Shamus! You can't tell me what to do!" Suzy cried, running off out of his sight. Shamus knew that he shouldn't have said that.

 

Suzy ran as far as she could, until sunset (that's right now in the story). She stood at the foot of a high cliff, and looked behind her, eyes filled with tears and anger. She looked out from the very edge of the cliff and stood still as a statue.

Shamus, feeling terrible, knew that if he went for her, she would fight him. And according to the fact that if he was sad, he could not fight, she would possibly kill him.

Fortionatly, Shamus had a plan; he needed time to create it though. But he swore, it would be a sucess. He would need Suzy, as well.

He smiled and raced off in the oposite direction. He felt that he could get his sister's attention by waiting until she forgets who he is; in a year. Then he would tell her who he was and try to befriend her. This would be tough, seeing as she wanted nothing more than to be alone. He could do it, though. And he will.

 

Part 2 coming soon!

 



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Guest
Guest
July 05, 2006
Oh Loved it!!!:P

May 10, 2006
Usa Female
I'm working on part 2 to this one and i'm coping ones for Mavik. I'm working on the one about Shad and Alouna constantly.

rockyjet
Rockyjet
April 22, 2006
and now this is in eith but NO ONE has read it.

rockyjet
Rockyjet
April 22, 2006
anyone read this yet? XD

rockyjet
Rockyjet
April 17, 2006
not as good as Mavik, i was fast with this 1 and i didn't cope. don't be surprised with bad spelling.lol




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