• wait!!! Come back! Don’t make the biggest mistake in your life! Wait!!!

 

Here you go Balto. I see you again! Oh no, you scream, because I am digging my teeth in your neck! Oh I am sorry, but you worth it! Come on Suar! Kill him; rip his skin off his tiny bones! Stop his heart beating and his lungs breathing, stop his eyes seeing the world, and stop his blood running through his body!!! I am sorry Balto, but I wanted to do it for four weeks – four last weeks with my mother! And you keep screaming and crying. See you in heaven! Bye!

Wait, I can sense humans. I can hear steps.

“There she is! Let me shoot her!” I turn around and see the hunter with my step-father.

RUN SUAR, RUN, THIS IS HELL, YOU NEED TO FIND HEAVEN!!!

RUN, RUN, RUN, RUN, RUN, RUN, RUN, RUN……………………………………………………………………….

 



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July 24, 2006
you are so mean to Balto. why didn't the hunter shoot his sister?

July 19, 2006
Usa Male
oh wow!:)

July 18, 2006
Usa Female
i loved this fanfic
do u write more?

mandy889
Mandy889
July 17, 2006
i think it was the best out of all of the stories.

Guest
Guest
July 17, 2006
i dont know why but this is my fav of ur story i guess its the story's irony. fabulous job!:P




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