victim no more.” He smiled.
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Eryn
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July 19, 2006
Great job! But lots of typoes!!
Good job anyway!
lilac99654
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February 15, 2006
did you get the name Spottedleaf from the Warriors books? I really like her!
Elvish
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February 15, 2006
This is my first Fan fic. So I want constructive critisism. Please tell me what I did wrong but tell me how I can make it better. Thanks alot.
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Good job anyway!
lilac99654