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| April 30, 2007 | ||
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Dragon Taner - i know aniu is all wolf i was talking about jennas mother. and balto was telling jenna about what happened to his mother and father |
| April 04, 2007 | ||
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Good story, but you made two small mistakes which you might want to fix: Aniu was all-wolf, not part wolf. Plus, Jenna already knew Balto was part wolf, but here you have him telling her that as if for the first time. Also, the punctuation needs work. |
![]() | March 27, 2006 | |
Its a good fic but i think id be better if more detail was added. Kira seems to be spreading all over balto source ever since i created her as balto's sister. ![]() |