own lines, they were empty; several gunshots could be heard behind me. I didn’t care I was in too large a panic. I started running somewhere, I noticing that I was taking myself back towards the SS line. Soon I felt something underneath me go ‘bang’. I rose 3 feet into the air and then hit the ground, huge pain covered my whole body.

I started screaming once again. No one came to help me.

I screamed louder when I saw that I had lost my both front paws and my stomach had been ripped open. I finally saw what kind of world I had inside of me. Blood ran out of my body. Finally I understood what was going to happen to me… I was dying.

”NO I DON’T WANT TO DIE!” I shouted once again into the air then I felt my heart slowing down. I could feel the wind and the smell of burnt flesh. I saw dead bodies on the ground around me, I was soon to be one of them. I ran onto a mine and paid the price.

’Can I be happy when I die? I can’t I just started living! I….’ My thoughts ended suddenly when my heart skipped several beats. Then I didn’t feel anything as my head dropped onto the ground and my eyes closed. My last view was of my second leader lying far from me.

I saw darkness then I didn’t felt anything except winds blow. I died with the others when the US made an attack against the SS for one hill. What a horrible way to die…..

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Questions:

A) In what kind of way has this novel been written?

a. Realism
b. Romance


B) Why did Rayne feel fear during the artillery strike and attack?

 


C) What had made him panic?


D) Why didn’t he want to die?


E) What kind of description did you get of the surrounding area?


Novel made by MSDF inspired by School.

Everything is © From MSDF….



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