That was sooo sad and wonderful!! I love the idea of how
Jenna got her bandana and why she gave it to Balto. Kudos to
you redwolf!!

Your stories know how to appeal to emotion. But when someone is dying don't make them talk as long as Lake did. write down what you want to say and summarize ot when you write it in the story. It is really good. You should start writing. Don't write a story unless you are passionate about it. Feel each character. It shows in your story if your close to the characters or not. But keep writing about Balto's happy part of life as well.

Bye Elf

Wow, good one! This is really great! A little sad, but great!

This was an incredible story!

WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAGGGHH!!!! Sniff sniff... It mace ne cry . It was soooo beutifull! WWWWWAAAAUUUUHHH!

Fantastic! This is your best fic yet! Please keep writing!

O...M...G!!! That was your absolute best fanfic I've read to date! Incredibly accurate to the film as well. I'd always wondered about Jenna's bandanna, and now I know!
Keep it up, OR ELSE!

redwolf03!! another awesome story! you are gonna be an awesome writer someday!