Author : Kiba
Date sent : December 03, 2005
Rating :
G (Everyone)Description : Dusty goes missing, and no one knows where she is at. Kodi
searches around nome, but cannot pin poin Dusty. So he travels into the
wilderness in search of her. What happens next?? You'll have to read it
to find out!!
Length : Very short -

Characters :

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Miller
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Kodiak, not Kodiac
Mel, not Mell
Dipsy, not Dipsey
Kirby, not Curby
went, not wen't
smiled, not smilled
Nome, not nome (capitalize towns)
I think you should work on the spelling, and tell why Dusty was taken by wolves in the first place!
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