sleep" Balto said.

"this is bad thing. Who attacked you?" The goose asked

"just a town bully" balto grunted

"well i am thinking you will live alot longer if you stay out of this bully's way" The goose said putting a feathered wing on balto's back. "I am boris by the way"

"im balto, and i appreciate your help but i don't need someone to mommy me" Balto replied, trying not to sound rude.

"fine, i go now" Boris said starting to walk away.

"you can stay if you like but don't tell me what to do ok" Balto said hurridly

"sounds good to me" Boris said turning back to balto. Just then balto felt hungry and got to his paws and said "im gunna go get some food. Want to come with me?" Balto asked
"sure im starving" Boris said following balto.

 

Several years pass and now balto, at the age of 3 runs into town with boris hanging onto his neck yelling "BALTO YOUR CRAZY DOG SLOW DOWN!"

Balto ignored him and continued running. With clever manuvering balto managed to get onto a roof with boris. It was then that balto heard a gunshot and balto saw a flare shoot across the sky.

"Three mile marker" Balto said pulling boris up onto the balcony that he stood on.

 

 

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June 30, 2010
please get the second part done!:cryeyesout: :howl: :duckiemouth:

June 20, 2007
Sweden Male
I liked it but what happened to Hully, Night and Lon?? you
should maybe write about that

May 31, 2006
Usa Female
I'm not a wolf. Kthxbai.
Vary good! I really enjoyed it! Keep up the good work!

Keane Husky
Keane
Husky
May 30, 2006
Wow! I was about to cry when they were beating port Balto, just for being different. Keep up the great work.

balto678
Balto678
January 26, 2006
Sure thing. Sorry this is taking so long though.
(i wrote alot today so it shouldn't be but too long before i finish)

balto678
Balto678
December 29, 2005
are you meaning a second part to a pup named balto?

Kodi's girl
Kodi's
girl
December 28, 2005
Good story but please try to get the second part up as soon as possible.I'm dyin' to know what is gonna happen!!:P

balto678
Balto678
December 10, 2005
Ill try to throw in as many twists and turns. Keep my readers on the edge of their seat.
Hopefully i wont make as many mistakes in it as i did 'A Pup Named Balto'

balto678
Balto678
December 06, 2005
I promise you my next one will be twice as good.

M.S.D.F(Pirkka)
M.S.D.F(
Pirkka)
December 06, 2005
I got to rise hat to you:P this story was having emotional beating what I have saw in real life, it took my heart off°x° well thinking that hunter part...nääh it was good but kind of fast, better it would be if you will explain the death.(salee)lol nvm..but I got to say that this was good:P

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