shouted to everyone and they started to blame Aleu that she didn't do nothing.
"Ou no Please don't fight enymore"She said to her self.
Now that civil war realy started.

"On that island is war as well" Derag said as he watched that island what were there.
"Are you sure?" Aleksi asked from him and looked that island what was all dark.
"Yes if Aleu can't get that peace I will" Derag said angryly and walked away.
"TEAM! REST" Aleksi shouted to the dog's who were standing and watching each others.
"Derag What are we going to do to that island?"Aleksi asked from Derag when he catched up him.
"We will see, we will see" Derag said and walked inside of a small cave what were Grands.
"I hope that Aleu will stop that civil war otherwise we have to attack on there as well" Derag said calmyly and felld in the sleep. "That islands destiny is on our paws....."

To be continued....







This was it my first fanfic and it is not ready yet there will be a nother two parts left....

M.S.D.F characters:Grand,Steiner,Tarkeen,Nalla,Karnar,Killer,Gunner,Silver,Dacca,Garru,General Derag,Colone Aleksi,Colone Baxer,Jeanly,Storm,Kanner,Glen,Pvt Lan,Sgt Thompson,Cpl Comet,Pvt Scope,Cpl Lucy, Pvt Elizabeth,Pvt Hunter

Universal studios:Aleu (Yes,only)

Copyrights from others: none.



I'am so sorry about the spelling errors and I hope that you understand what happened in this story.

Two parts left. I hope that you like to read them as well. (and sorry about the raw parts)



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July 05, 2008
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
I did have problems reading it in places but otherwise its a
brillaint story*favs*

September 13, 2006
Canada Female
loved the fanfic

Guest
Guest
August 10, 2006
Very nice..I only read the page 12. (I don't know why). Great story!:P

Trixie~Wulf-TWC/AFP
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AFP
March 22, 2006
Keep***....................................................
........... ....CARRY ON!...............................lol

Trixie~Wulf-TWC/AFP
Trixie~W
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AFP
March 22, 2006
Your English is good enough for me! Kedep up the great Famfic work, man!!! Fifty thumbs up!:P :cool:

balt678
Balt678
September 29, 2005
M.S.D.F. ill read your FF this weekend. Im busy with mine. but i should have it done this weekend so that's when ill read it.

M.S.D.F(pirkka)
M.S.D.F(
pirkka)
September 22, 2005
lol well I readet my self and ... well I saw many spelling errors what I frogeted to repair sorry about themlol

nighteyes
Nighteye
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September 20, 2005
haven't read the entire story yet, but what i've read its pretty good so far :3. Your grammar doesn't bother me much as I understand what you want to be said ;) I certainly hope this will not be your only fanfic!!

M.S.D.F(pirkka)
M.S.D.F(
pirkka)
September 29, 2005
I liked to add something on this second part but with my skills I couldn't do it any bigger than that, sorry about that guys, in the 3 part I got same problems but I try to do my all to got it atleast bigger than this first one




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