shouted to everyone and they started to blame Aleu that she didn't do nothing.
"Ou no Please don't fight enymore"She said to her self.
Now that civil war realy started.
"On that island is war as well" Derag said as he watched that island what were there.
"Are you sure?" Aleksi asked from him and looked that island what was all dark.
"Yes if Aleu can't get that peace I will" Derag said angryly and walked away.
"TEAM! REST" Aleksi shouted to the dog's who were standing and watching each others.
"Derag What are we going to do to that island?"Aleksi asked from Derag when he catched up him.
"We will see, we will see" Derag said and walked inside of a small cave what were Grands.
"I hope that Aleu will stop that civil war otherwise we have to attack on there as well" Derag said calmyly and felld in the sleep. "That islands destiny is on our paws....."
To be continued....
This was it my first fanfic and it is not ready yet there will be a nother two parts left....
M.S.D.F characters:Grand,Steiner,Tarkeen,Nalla,Karnar,Killer,Gunner,Silver,Dacca,Garru,General Derag,Colone Aleksi,Colone Baxer,Jeanly,Storm,Kanner,Glen,Pvt Lan,Sgt Thompson,Cpl Comet,Pvt Scope,Cpl Lucy, Pvt Elizabeth,Pvt Hunter
Universal studios:Aleu (Yes,only)
Copyrights from others: none.
I'am so sorry about the spelling errors and I hope that you understand what happened in this story.
Two parts left. I hope that you like to read them as well. (and sorry about the raw parts)
| Previous Page | 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 |
![]() ulf-TWC/ AFP | March 22, 2006 | |
Keep***.................................................... ........... ....CARRY ON!............................... ![]() |
![]() ulf-TWC/ AFP | March 22, 2006 | |
Your English is good enough for me! Kedep up the great Famfic work,
man!!! Fifty thumbs up! ![]() |
![]() | September 29, 2005 | |
M.S.D.F. ill read your FF this weekend. Im busy with mine. but i
should have it done this weekend so that's when ill read it. |
![]() pirkka) | September 22, 2005 | |
well I readet my self and ... well I saw many spelling errors what
I frogeted to repair sorry about them![]() |
brillaint story*favs*