M.S.D.F Operation: Silver Wind

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Note: This fanfic have raw text so I hope that young people don't read this, but if you want to read this so go ahead. Pg :12 and this text realy have few raw parts, but this is a war story anyway.
That who have write this story is not from UK, USA or Canada (not even from german)
so I apologize spelling erros. Also I like to thank few my friends who helped me in this story but I don't say their names.

(I'm doing my best to avoid spelling errors, so please respect my hard work.
I'am respectin those who got proplems in english writing and it isn't so easy as it looks like. If you come somewhere were english is not main language it's REALY hard to write english fanfic, belive me.
Ouh, and this will surely help me in english lesons. I'm aiming to the 10 In america it is mayby A+)




Copyright from Universal studio.



Tips: if you like to use my character please don't use them with out my premission.
(In the end of the story you will hear them)


(This Story Created by M.S.D.F HQ Date: Started:9.9.2005 Finished:15.6.2005

I hope that you will read this, nice reading moments and
Enjoy.....










Chapter one

Location: Somewhere in Alaska.
Time: 8:03 pm, 12.6 1928.



Two huge wolf paks were standing near their split their territory.
It was warm day and sun was lowering to the west.
paks leaders were watching each others.
When suddenly one of them say said "So my old friend, do you understand these rules?"
That wolfs name was Tarkeen. He was Silver white fured wolf and he was leading a clan what name is "Silverstream". He is realy proud on his team.
"Yes what ever you say, IF somebody of your pak member is crossing this line, HE OR SHE SHALL DIE!"
Said the other pak leader named Grand who was leading clan what name is "Brown shield" he was black,white fured wolf. He was prety big wolf and crule type as well. He got a ugly scar a cross he's face.
"You are definitely right" said Grands "right paw" Steiner who was grey white fured wolf/dog. He got two scars on he's muzzle's left side what look like lightnings, but they also look like two S letters.
"Well if were deal this thing we can settle down and be in peace" Grand said as he smiled to Tarkeen.
"Very well my pal let's live in peace" Tarkeen said happyly because he was in peace with a wolf who don't like him.
Wolf's turned and walked away. bouth of those paks got about 30-40 wolfs.
A female wolf who was Tarkeens mate walked towards Tarkeen. She got a grey white fur and she was realy beautiful. She walked near Tarkeen and sitted down close to him."So, are you sure that you can trust him you know that he hate you more than Aleu,who is now on her's island?"She asked a bit worried tone in her voice .Tarkeen turned he's head towards her's and licked her muzzle."I bet he will keep he's promise"Tarkeen said and rised on his up and followd he's pak.
They walked back to their main area and howl to tell everyone that they were finnaly in peace.
Aleu sitted and heard that howl and enjoyed every second. Even she started to howl with her pak
it was long and happy howl from both sides even Brown Shield's pak joined on it.
Somewhere one dog was listening that howl top of a huge hill. He started to smile and said quitely to him self "Finnaly they are in peace" he rised on his fours and walked in the darknes.

 

 



Chapter Two

Location:Nava's old homeland.
Time:8:34pm 12.6 1928.


Near beach in Grands cave.
Grand was just going to sleep, but he saw Steiner who was sitting in front of cave's entery.
"Steiner what do you want NOW?" Grand snapped and watched that wolf/dog.
"I think that this peace will be good advantage" Stainer said and gived a evil smile.
"Do you think so?" Grand said as he rised on his fours and yawned."I think you are crazy wolf/dog what i'v seen in my life" Grand continued when he slaped a small bone what almost hited on Steiners head.
"maybe,but I'm also realy stubborn and good tactical leader he said proud tone in he's voice and looked that wolf what was in he's mind only a barbarian who is leading a pak what support him.
"Shut up! you are only a half wolf and you don't understand wolves so much as I know!"Grand shout angry grin in he's face.
"Mayby I don't understand you or your pak"Steiner said a sad tone in he's voice. He look at he's leader.
"But yes you are right Steiner you are right.This peace is a realy good opportunity to start a war" Grand said more and more angry grin in he's face.
He looked once more on Steiner and walked near to him.
"So do you have a plan?,Steiner?" he said as he walked towards Steiner.
"Not right now, but I will have tomorrow" Steiner said as he turned to leave this cave.
"WHY DO YOU TURN YOUR BACK TO ME STEINER!!" Grand shouted and growled to the wolf/dog who stoped and turned he's head towarts him.
"I have to go Grand do I have to ask a promision if I want to go out?" Steiner said calm tone on his voice.
Grand growled and walked few meters and lay down. "Get out!" he shouted to Steiner who was leaving.
"As you want" Steiner said and walked out. He arrived he's private cave and lay down and started to thing how he's starting this war. Suddenly he knew how he's going to start this war.
"HEY you go and tell to the Grand that I know now what to do, and ask premission to build a team so I can do my duty I call it as a bloody day" He said to a young wolf who was standing in front of he's cave.
"Jawolh!" that wolf said and disappear to the darknes.
Steiner smiled and rested he's head on he's paws.
"Tomorrow Tarkeen you will cry and I promise that YOU realy will" he said gladly and fell on the sleep
He was thinking members what he will take with him on this mission what he named operation: Bloody Day.
In Grand's cave Grand was nuzzling his mate when that lone wolf arrived there
"What do you want?" Grand said angryly to the wolf what standed on the cave's entry
"Steiner said that the plan is ready and he also asked your premission to build a small pak to carry out this missoin what he named Bloody Day" that wolf said as he were ordet to do.
"OK he can build that team and carry out his mission, AND I hope that it works"
Grand said as he walked in front of that wolf who swallowd something.
"Befehl m" that wolf said as he runned back to Steiners cave to reaport what he heard.
Steiner smiled when that wolf said what he heard.
"Don't worry Grand that what you are fearing is not going to happend" he said to he's self and fell back to the sleep.He thinked also that when he teached that "Jawolh" word to the other wolves and he don't like if wolves don't use that word in front of him. One wolf lost he's life when he didn't use that word.








Chapter Three.

Location:Somewhere Silversteams territory.
Time:9:21. 13.6 1928.


A small pak of wolves where walking in their territoty.
That small paks leader name was Glan who was Tarkeen's son
He leaded his small team to an alley what was clear from trees.It was beautiful morning
and sky was clear Glan looked he's team members who were close behind him.
He sniffed air and tryed to find prey animals.
"We have been here whole morning and we haven't find nothing" one of the wolfs said sadly he was young wolf and realy spirited type.
"SHUT UP!or we never find something" nother wolf said behind him.
"Stop fighting now!" Glan said angrily.
Those two wolves were Storm and Kanner.
Storm growled a bit on Kanner who slaped suddenly a cross he's face and shout"Why are you growling to me,PUP!"
"KNOCK IT OF" one female wolf said and walked near to Storm who was hited on ground.Her name was Jeanly and she was Silver white fured wolf and prety beautiful.
"He started" Kanner explained desperately.
"You slaped him!" she shouted to Kanner. Kanner growled and walked farer on Storm.
Jeanly licked Storms small cut what he get from Kanner.
"Thanks Jeanly" Storm said as she stoped the licking.
"your welcome" she said and giggled a while.
"C'mon guys lets continue!" Glan shouted to the wolwes.
Wolves continutet on the valley and arrived on a small hill were was many trees and it was easy to hide there and behind wolves were small bush area.
"Whoa there is many trees!" Storm shouted when he saw the trees.
Glen looked the trees and thought something in he's head.
"Do you thing that what I'm thinking?" Glens friend said when he looked he's leader.
"There is something" Glen said bit worried tone in his voice.
Sudenly a small pak of wolves attacked from bushes behind them and they were fast when they jumped on Glen paks neck.
"AMBUSH" Glen shouted when wolf attacked on his neck bitting it as hard as he could.
Screams were breiking the silence of nature when someones were fighting on their life's.
It ended as fast as it started, lonely bloody bodies were lying on ground.
Glen was still life, but badly wounded. He looked at their enemy's and recognized Steiner who was ripping Kanners throat. Blood runned down on Glen's neck and pain were realy huge.Sudenly he watched Steiners bloody muzzle and saw he's sharp fangs.
"Well what we have here a Silverstreams second leader!" Steiner shouted gladly.
"Are you now happy murderer" Glen said as he spited blood out of he's mouth.
"No, of course I'm not, you are still alive" Steiner said when he watched Glen.
"Sad that this end this way" Steiner said when he lowered he's head and gript Glen's throat.
Small painful scream breiked the silence again, but it ended fast.
"Now it's done"Steiner said and started to laught and his team joined








































































































































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July 05, 2008
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
I did have problems reading it in places but otherwise its a
brillaint story*favs*

September 13, 2006
Canada Female
loved the fanfic

Guest
Guest
August 10, 2006
Very nice..I only read the page 12. (I don't know why). Great story!:P

Trixie~Wulf-TWC/AFP
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March 22, 2006
Keep***....................................................
........... ....CARRY ON!...............................lol

Trixie~Wulf-TWC/AFP
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AFP
March 22, 2006
Your English is good enough for me! Kedep up the great Famfic work, man!!! Fifty thumbs up!:P :cool:

balt678
Balt678
September 29, 2005
M.S.D.F. ill read your FF this weekend. Im busy with mine. but i should have it done this weekend so that's when ill read it.

M.S.D.F(pirkka)
M.S.D.F(
pirkka)
September 22, 2005
lol well I readet my self and ... well I saw many spelling errors what I frogeted to repair sorry about themlol

nighteyes
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September 20, 2005
haven't read the entire story yet, but what i've read its pretty good so far :3. Your grammar doesn't bother me much as I understand what you want to be said ;) I certainly hope this will not be your only fanfic!!

M.S.D.F(pirkka)
M.S.D.F(
pirkka)
September 29, 2005
I liked to add something on this second part but with my skills I couldn't do it any bigger than that, sorry about that guys, in the 3 part I got same problems but I try to do my all to got it atleast bigger than this first one




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