your tongues.” He said laughing again. “I’ll grant you one wish go on speak up Blaize which one do you want you want me to let you go and take your parents as prisoners or you want me too keep you.” He said looking at Blaize. “How…… everybody was looking at Blaize, How about none of them any other option?” “No kid you just wasted your luck.” Steele said , “take them away I’ll deal with them later.” They walked away. ……
Chapter8
Aleu watched her brothers and sister escorted by Steele’s minions. She felt like killing him but it was not her fight to fight.
It was her father and mothers. Aleu and they others crouched down ready to attack at any moment. When two dogs came flying in and hit Steele. Out of the shadows came Blaize, Likea, and Sheae “What you thought we would let you rule us.” Blaize said steeping aside with the others. Steele leapt on Balto and then ran out of the cave “ I got him!” Balto said growling as he ran out of the cave.
“Steele!” Balto yelled Steele turned around “Look at you your so stupid coming out here alone!” Steele said as he ran toward Balto and jumped at him Balto moved out his way. Steele tripped on a rock a fell on the snow. He regained his balance and jumped on Balto’s back. Balto yelled in agony and pain. Steele lunged for his throat. Balto tried throwing him off but couldn’t. Steele pushed Balto down. He started pressing him harder and harder. Balto couldn’t breathe. Steele was trying to block his lungs.
He bit down on his tail dragging him. Balto fur was filled with blood. Steele came to a cliff “You know wolf dog you were never that strong, now I can have Jenna to myself.” Steele said laughing
Balto closed his eyes “Bye Jenna.” He said. Steele raised his paw. But suddenly Steele lost balance and fell from the cliff “Ahhhha.” Echoed Steele’s scream. Balto felt no pain. “Balto are you okay?” Jenna said with tears in her eyes. Balto opened his eyes to see Jenna beside him. “Jen…. You saved me.” He said
“Balto I saw him he was hurting you I ad to do something.”
She said crying. Balto tried to lick her tears but he was to weak .
“No Jen your not responsible for his death.” Besides Drake wanted him to Die after everything he did.” I’m glad you came he would have killed me.” Balto said trying to smile. “Balto are you okay.” Jenna said. Balto looked at the snow around him it was red his fur was almost red. “No I’m hurt.” He said Jenna nuzzled him and said “Lean on me I’ll help you back.” Jenna said Balto smiled and nuzzled her back. Balto stood up and leaned on Jenna then Began to walk away in the dark night…….
The End
Epilogue
Steele dug himself out of the snow “Balto you and Jenna are going to pay for this.” I’ll get my comrades and kill you once and for all!”
Steele said “you just wait”………….
Preview of the story Balto: Heart Broken
Prologue
The windiest night ever in Nome Maro was walking to the woods.
He sat by a small beautiful stream where he communicated with his parents some how. “Father you have told me that every moment everything changes.” He got no reply “My time is coming soon father I’ll join you soon but please my life loves this beautiful husky she is smart kind considerate my heart won’t leave her but my life will.” Father I’m lost at this point. “In my dream I saw a black husky exactly same one in the town his name is Maliki he is the one I’m looking for father but please tell me how much more time do I have to complete my mission my wish my dream in this world?” Maro said looking up to the sky………
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![]() Wolf_fan writer | April 07, 2006 | |
I really wish you'd write more stories like this! Great job,
Dingowolf. But lately, your stories (or the ones you send at least)
have gotten shorter and shorter, until they're little more than a
paragraph... I'll keep posting them, but please... Read the
instructions for sending fanfics. - Except for poems, the fanfics must
have a good length, and not look like a summary. Please forgive me if I sound harsh. I don't like to be the bearer of bad news. ![]() |
![]() f | March 15, 2006 | |
Thanks I'm fan of stories my self I've read everyones stories here but
the second one is also finsihed I've got to fix up edges and proffread
it I think it's set to go! In fact I'm still thinking of third one If
I'm not lazy enough to post the second one |
![]() The Dark Wolf | November 10, 2005 | |
This story cool. i loved it, even liked it too, hope the secend ones
the same as the first. ![]() |
![]() 03 | September 15, 2005 | |
Wow! This is a fine piece of work, dingowolf. I can tell you put a
lot of time and effort into it. I really liked the way that you built
suspense. Everything that the characters had to go through in the
beginning kept me on the edge of my seat. Especially since it all
lead up to a suspenseful final scene. That, and you left off with
quite a cliffhanger there! I can't wait to see what Steele tries to
do next, and what happens to Maro. Only things that could have been
better were, a few scenes where I thought you could have been a more
descriptive (don't be afraid of writing for too long ). And also,
make sure you start a new line whenever a different character speaks
so's not to confuse the reader. But, other than that, great job! I
look forward to more of your work. |