Brilliant fic hurry with next

i'll call that good

Great fic!

I really wish you'd write more stories like this! Great job, Dingowolf. But lately, your stories (or the ones you send at least) have gotten shorter and shorter, until they're little more than a paragraph... I'll keep posting them, but please... Read the instructions for sending fanfics. - Except for poems, the fanfics must have a good length, and not look like a summary.

Please forgive me if I sound harsh. I don't like to be the bearer of bad news.

Thanks I'm fan of stories my self I've read everyones stories here but the second one is also finsihed I've got to fix up edges and proffread it I think it's set to go! In fact I'm still thinking of third one If I'm not lazy enough to post the second one

great story

This story cool. i loved it, even liked it too, hope the secend ones the same as the first.

Wow! This is a fine piece of work, dingowolf. I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into it. I really liked the way that you built suspense. Everything that the characters had to go through in the beginning kept me on the edge of my seat. Especially since it all lead up to a suspenseful final scene. That, and you left off with quite a cliffhanger there! I can't wait to see what Steele tries to do next, and what happens to Maro. Only things that could have been better were, a few scenes where I thought you could have been a more descriptive (don't be afraid of writing for too long ). And also, make sure you start a new line whenever a different character speaks so's not to confuse the reader. But, other than that, great job! I look forward to more of your work.

Sounds interesting! I'd love to read it, but i can't...Still sounds suspensful! Keep it up!

This is an A-W-E-S-O-M-E piece of work! Read it on the formums, and thoroughly enjoyed it! Everyone should read this fanfic. Keep up the good work, Dinogwolf! I look forward to your next piece!